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Hogwarts, a home away from home that is for a 17-year-old girl named Hermoine Granger. She had gotten more of a figure, she had gone from an A cup to a C cup in bra’s and she had killer blue-green eyes and silky ash blonde hair. Since she found out she was adopted by the Grangers and found out she was a Blacktree who where pureblood witches and wizards. She decides to start acting like a pureblood and look like one. The Blacktrees treated her like a princess and she started to feel like one too.
Hermoine heard a knock on her door and told whomever it was to enter. Angelica Blacktree walked in and smiled. `` Time to catch the train dear, your father is waiting downstairs with a surprise for you`` she said. Hermoine smiled and went downstairs, and kissed her father on his check. ``Hello father! Mother said you had a surprise for me`` said Hermoine. ``Yes I do here’s the keys now go outside your trunk is already in the back`` David said. Hermoine walked outside and gasped as she stared at her bran new 2004 blood red mustang convertible with “MIONE” as her license plate. ``THANK YOU DAD! I love it so much I can’t believe you got a car for me`` said Hermoine. `` It’s a gift since my little princess made Head Girl, but you should hurry the train leaves in 30 min`` replied her father. Hermoine smiled and waved as she drove to the station. Hermoine arrived with 10 min to spare so she loaded up her luggage anucknuck up behind Harry and Ron. `` Harry James Potter, Ronald William Weasley, you naughty boys, you haven’t returned any of my letters and Jazz needs something to do during the summer`` she yelled. They both jumped and turned around and gasped in shock. ``WOW, you look great Moine`` said Harry. ``Bloody Hell, you look hot`` said Ron. Hermoine smiled and told them to find somewhere to sit on the train while she had to go to a prefects meeting. Hermoine bumped into someone and stared into warm silvery-blue eyes ``Sorry Malfoy`` she said and turned around. `` Well you know my name how about I know yours sweetheart`` said Draco. ```Wow ferret boy getting a lil soft there`` she said. ``Hermoine that’s you? Damn you look hot`` said Draco. Hermoine smiled and went to the heads meeting. `` Welcome Miss. Blacktree, Mr. Malfoy the prefects will sit at a table to themselves and the heads will sit alone as well. Also you two will plan all the major events for the fifth years and up. You will be called to see Prof. Dumbledore and myself once sinner is over you may go to dinner now`` said Prof. McGonagall. Hermoine turned and walked out the door and went to the bathroom to changed into her robes since they were 10 min away. Slytherin robes were what she wore now. They were still new to her but she wondered how Harry and Ron would reacted when the saw her in Green and Silver instead of the and and Gold that she use to wear.

Please Review this is my first try at a writing a story and I would like to know how you the reader thinks about it..