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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please continue!!!
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November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ermm...i think it\'s a good start but you need to kind of fix your paragraphs and lines. i find it hard to read it since they are all in one paragraph. maybe you should fix it next time.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sounds good so far write more
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the plot , i can almost smell the hg/dm smut comming ... ;)
this is a really good idea , i hope you develop it further (it might be the next \"we\'ll always have paris\")
but you rush through it a bit, this part copuld have been longer than it was ... ijust want more ... maybe thats why ?
please dont abandon this fic ...
this is a really good idea , i hope you develop it further (it might be the next \"we\'ll always have paris\")
but you rush through it a bit, this part copuld have been longer than it was ... ijust want more ... maybe thats why ?
please dont abandon this fic ...
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning, but I hope you will explain why she left her adopted parents and how she came to be changed from Gryfindor to Slytherin.