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Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

By: TCardan
folder Harry Potter › General
Rating: Adult ++
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Professor Perfect

Here we go again. Enjoy!


Disclaimer: I can claim no ownership of the characters (except Mary Sue Perfect) or places used in this fiction.


Professor Perfect


The next morning the boys awoke to find Mary Sue gone and Neville sleeping like a baby. Dean walked over to him and shook his shoulder to wake him.

“Hey, Neville,” he called out.

Neville opened his eyes and groggily looked at the group of faces surrounding his bed. “What?” he asked, sleepily.

“Well?” Ron asked.

“Well what?” Neville replied.

“How’d it go last night?” Harry asked, impatiently.

A huge grin filled Neville’s face and he turned over, hiding his embarrassed expression from his roommates.

“Did you?” Seamus asked.

They saw Neville nod into his pillow and all hell broke loose.

“No fucking way!” Ron exclaimed. “Merlin! Neville’s lost his virginity before we have.”

“Speak for yourself!” Seamus exclaimed. “I lost it a few months ago.”

“How was it? I bet she was good. Come on, Neville, fill us in,” Dean said, excitedly.

Neville looked at him and replied, “Gentlemen don’t talk about their private relations.”

“You’ve got to be kidding,” Ron said, wide-eyed. “Don’t give us that ‘gentleman’ rubbish. We want all the horny details. Did she suck you off? Did she strip bare? Who was on top? Come on, Neville, give us something!”

Neville shook his head, making them all grumble.

“Just wait until it’s my turn,” Ron said. “I won’t tell you a thing.”

“She’s really nice,” Neville replied. “I don’t want to talk about her behind her back.”

“Just tell us one thing,” Dean persisted. “Was it good?”

Neville’s grin grew again and they all had their answer.


When the boys went down to the common room, they thought they’d wait for Mary Sue. Hermione was already there and when Ron saw her, he couldn’t help but blush. Did she really fancy him like Mary Sue said? Hermione looked at him strangely.

“Hermione, is Mary Sue still in her room?” Harry asked.

Hermione frowned. “You boys are such fools. Do you really think she’s going to pick one of you?”

They looked at each other knowingly and Hermione wondered what was going through their minds.

“Why would you say something like that?” Neville asked.

“Because,” she said, smugly, “Mary Sue just left with Malfoy and Zabini not five minutes ago. They came to Gryffindor Tower and waited for her. So you see, the Slytherin sex gods have staked their claim. She’ll probably end up with one of them, maybe both of them from what I hear.”

Their expressions changed to worry and they now looked at one another in consternation. “Mary Sue doesn’t know about Slytherins,” Neville said. “She probably wants to make friends with everyone.”

“We should warn her,” Dean replied.

“No, we should hex those Slytherin bastards for trying to take advantage of a Gryffindor,” Ron said.

“You really think Mary Sue is that innocent?” Hermione replied, surprised. “Boys are so gullible when it comes to a pretty face. I think she wants to keep you all in her pocket, taking you out to play with whenever she’s in the mood.”

The boys looked uncomfortable at her words. No, they couldn’t believe that Mary Sue would be so callous. She was too sweet.

“Come on,” Harry said. “Let’s see if they brought her to the Great Hall for breakfast. I think we need to have a good talk with her.”

OOOOOOOOOO

Draco and Blaise walked on either side of Mary Sue, taking the long way to the Great Hall. Blaise looked behind them to see if anyone was there before he placed his hand on the back of her leg, sliding it under her skirt.

Mary Sue looked at him and giggled. “Blaise!”

“Just checking, love,” he smiled, sexily. “You’re a good girl. You remembered the no knickers rule.”

She pressed up against his shoulder, her breath quickening at his hand caressing her bare arse. “Yes, I did remember,” she whispered into his ear. “What do I get for a reward?”

The corner of his mouth went up as he stepped in front of her, pushing her backwards with his body towards the men’s restroom. Draco smirked and looked both ways down the hall before following them in. Then he checked the stalls to make sure no one was in them before locking the restroom door.

“You want to know what you get?” Blaise asked, gruffly, his dark eyes smoldering with lust. He kept walking her body backwards until her arse hit the edge of the sink, his arms wrapped about her waist. His mouth descended on hers, tongues tangling in an ever heating kiss, as his hand make its way up her blouse, caressing and kneading as it moved.

Draco now came to the side of them and pushed at Blaise to move over a bit. Without releasing her mouth, Blaise stepped sideways, grinding his erection onto her hip while he continued to pinch and play with her tingling nipples.

Draco bent forward and attacked the side of her neck with soft sucks and kisses, his hand moving down the side of her leg. Then in a swift motion, he grabbed her leg behind the knee and lifted it until her foot was propped up on the edge of the sink next to them, spreading her wide. Blaise held on to her to keep her from loosing her balance and they both watched as Draco fell to his knees, licking a trail on the inside of her thigh while locking his sexy eyes onto hers.

“You want him to lick your pretty cunt, Princess?” Blaise whispered against her ear, his tongue flicking out at her lobe.

Mary Sue was on fire. These two were so fucking sexy! “Oh, yes,” she moaned. “Please!”

Draco moved his mouth slowly up her thigh, loving the look of need on her face. “Stop teasing her, Draco,” Blaise grinned, lowering his mouth to her neck as he slipped his fingers into her bra and began pinching and caressing her nipples to hard peaks.

When Draco’s mouth finally reached her hot core, she gasped, shutting her eyes and throwing her head back against the mirror on the wall. He groaned as if it were the best thing he had ever tasted and began his skillful tonguing of her slick folds, licking, sucking on her clit and licking some more. He plunged his tongue into her opening, stiffening it like a cock as he moved his head in a fucking motion.

Mary Sue had a hand in his hair, grasping onto him, not wanting him to ever stop. She moaned and moved her hips in a circular motion, complementing his own expert moves. “Oh, God, yes!” she moaned.

“Come all over his fucking face,” Blaise rasped against her neck, grinding his own erection against her hip while he sucked at her soft skin below her ear.

Draco decided to go in for the kill. He wrapped his arms around her thighs and used his fingers to spread her pussy lips wide, exposing her swollen little nub waiting for attention. He pulled her harder against his face as he attacked it with his mouth, slipping the tip of his tongue under the hood and sawing on it over and over.

She screamed and jerked her hips upwards, but he held on tightly, never stopping what he was doing. Blaise covered her screams with his mouth, kissing her deeply and holding her body down as she struggled with the intense sensations. She gripped onto his arms, squeezing and shaking as she climaxed, gushing into Draco’s waiting mouth.

“Hmm, hmm, hmm,” she moaned in Blaise’s mouth as her body convulsed. Draco continued licking her hole, savoring her taste on his tongue. He loved how fucking sensitive girls were down here. When he finished, he kissed her inner thighs again and said, “That was so fucking incredible. You taste so good.”

“Let me please the two of you now,” she panted, recovering from her intense orgasm.

“You do please us,” Draco replied, standing up. “Yet I do have raging hard on.”

“Mmmm,” Mary Sue moaned. “Decide who wants my mouth and who wants my pussy, quickly.”

Blaise smirked and pushed himself up in a sitting position on the sink, pulling his hard cock out of his trousers. “I’ll take your mouth, love,” he said. She turned towards him, smiling at his excited face, and stroked his long rod with the tips of her fingers, her tongue darting out to wet her lips.

Draco moved behind her as he undid his trousers, feeling her arse press against him as she bent to take Blaise into her mouth. Blaise took her long hair and twisted it around one of his hands, moving it away so he could watch what she did.. He leaned back against the mirror, his dark eyes half closed as he watched.

Mary Sue moaned, her mouth full with Blaise’s cock, when she felt Draco slip deep inside her from behind. She closed her lips around Blaise’s hard rod and began bobbing her head and fucking him with her mouth and tongue. He groaned, closing his eyes at times. She was so fucking good.

Draco grabbed her hips and pounded into her, aware of the short amount of time they had left before people would wonder about their whereabouts. But a good morning fuck was worth any flack he might receive as a result. In fact, he vowed silently, that he’d start every morning out this way, if possible. That would start the day off right!

He could tell that Blaise was close to coming by the noises he was making, so Draco pumped into her, harder, faster. Mary Sue moaned, her mouth full of cock, as she felt close to coming again. When Blaise threw his head back and released a strangled breath, she couldn’t help but come at the same time he did, swallowing his release while releasing her own fluids onto Draco’s cock.

Draco felt her convulsing around him and shoved his member as deep as it could go, holding on to her hips while he came as well. “Fuck!” he gasped. After he pulled out, she stood and turned to him, wrapping her arms about his neck and giving his flushed face some gentle kisses.

“That was spectacular,” she sighed.

“Yeah,” he replied. “It was.”

They cleaned up and made their way quickly to the Great Hall, knowing that breakfast was soon to be over. When they entered, she turned and walked quickly to the Gryffindor table while Draco and Blaise headed to their house table. Mary Sue blushed at the stares she was receiving from her housemates. She sat down between Neville and Dean, across from Harry, Ron and Seamus.

The boys had noticed how late she was and they also didn’t miss who slunk in at the same moment she did. They looked at each other, knowing something had to be done about it.

Mary Sue smiled as she poured some orange juice and said, “Good morning, boys.”

“Mary Sue, are those gits bothering you?” Harry asked, deciding to broach the subject delicately.

“Gits?” she replied, innocently.

“The Slytherins, Malfoy and Zabini,” Seamus added.

She laughed nervously. “Bothering me? Oh no, they’ve been very kind.”

“You do know about their families, don’t you?” Ron asked.

She shook her head. “No, not really. We haven’t discussed families in too much detail yet. Why are you boys looking at me like that? I can’t help that they have an interest in me.”

“You can tell them to stay the fuck away from you,” Ron said, frowning. “They are bad news, Mary Sue. Their dads, well, let’s just say they kill and torture people.”

“What?!” Mary Sue exclaimed, shocked. “How could you say such a thing?”

“It’s true,” Ron continued. “Malfoy’s father is in Azkaban - that’s the wizard prison. He’s what we call a Death Eater, a killer for a certain Dark Wizard. We are pretty sure that Zabini’s father is one as well, though he’s been good at hiding it.”

Dean leaned in close to her ear and whispered. “And Death Eaters especially hate Muggles. If they ever found out about you…” He stopped talking and looked at her pointedly.

Mary Sue looked at him with wide eyes. “Oh my,” she whispered, glancing at the Slytherin table. Draco and Blaise were watching her, not looking too happy at the fact that she was surrounded by boys and conversing with them. “What do I do?”

“We’ll protect you, Mary Sue,” Harry said. “But you have to stop spending time with those two. They might discover that you are not a witch.”

“I’ll try, but I don’t think they are going to give up on me so easily,” she answered.

“Just stay around us,” Ron said. “We’ll make sure they leave you alone.”

Mary Sue avoided looking towards the Slytherin table again, afraid that they would see her worried expression. What in the world did she get herself into?

She turned her attention to Neville, who sat quietly beside her. She realized that he was struggling with how to behave around her now that they had been so intimate. She leaned towards him and said, “Hello, Neville.”

He glanced quickly at her and said, “Hi.”

“How are you feeling?” she asked, knowingly.

Neville blushed, still looking at his plate. “Great,” he admitted. The other boys snickered at Neville’s discomfort.

“Which one is Susan?” she asked, looking at the Ravenclaw table.

Neville was about to answer her when Seamus said, “That one, on the end.” He pointed to a girl who had a very scholarly look, but with a sort of classic beauty.

“Meet me in the common room after classes, Neville,” Mary Sue said. “I’m going to teach you how to act around Susan and how to get her attention.”

Neville nodded. “All right.”

“Oh, and of course we’ll have our other lessons latter on,” she teased.

Neville turned bright red while his roommates laughed at his bashfulness.

OOOOOOOOO


Mary Sue rushed around with Harry to all their classes, never giving time for Blaise and Draco to catch up with her. When they had classes together, they looked at her questioningly and sent her little notes that said, “What’s wrong?” She would write back saying “Nothing is wrong.”

In potions, Draco and Blaise kept glancing back at her and Harry, faces scrunched in anger when they noticed how close Harry was sitting to her. “This is not good, Blaise,” Draco said. “Something has to be done.”

“I agree,” he answered. “Those fuck ups are probably trying to turn her against us. It’s unfortunate that she’s in the Gryffindork house. How the hell are we supposed to keep them away from her?”

“Same way they are trying to keep her away from us,” Draco grinned, evilly. “If they are filling her head full of stories about us, we’ll do the same about them. If that doesn’t work, we’ll have to resort to more extreme measures.”

“If they fucking touch her…” Blaise growled.

“Then we hurt them,” Draco answered.

OOOOOOOOOO


“Now, Neville, the first thing you must do is let her know of your interest,” Mary Sue said as they sat in a corner of the common room.

“What?!” he exclaimed with wide eyes. “I… I can’t! She'll laugh and tell her friends.”

“Oh come, Neville,” she answered. “I don’t mean for you come right out and say it. It must be subtle. Desperate people are hardly attractive. But you must let her know that she peaks your interest because knowing that someone is interested in you gets you to think about them, even if you hadn’t ever considered them before. It’s flattering to be admired and Susan will be no exception to that feeling.”

“How do I go about it then?” Neville asked, fascinated and excited about delving into the female mind.

“It all starts with ’the look’,” she explained, lifting one brow.

“The look?” Neville repeated.

“Yes,” she nodded. “She must catch you looking at her. When she notices you looking, linger only a moment more before you avert your eyes away. And when you do look away, just the slightest hint of a smile should be on your face. Here, let’s practice. I’ll pretend I’m you and you be Susan. You turn your head and catch me watching you.”

They practiced ’the look’ for awhile until Neville had it down and then Mary Sue moved onto the next step. “Now, after awhile, she’ll start looking back at you, wondering if your looking at her again,” Mary Sue explained. “That will tell you that she’s noticed your interest, even if she’s not sure how she feels about you. But what’s important is that she’s now noticing you and that is the time you put on your most appealing appearance.”

“Oh… great,” Neville mumbled.

“Neville,” Mary Sue replied, “you can be sexy. It’s all about attitude.” Mary Sue reached over and loosened Neville’s tie a bit. Then she lightly mussed his hair, just enough to look like he’d just came from a good snogging session. “Now, loosen up your body a bit.”

“What do you mean?” Neville asked.

“Don’t be stiff, look more relaxed,” she said. “In other words, look like you’ve just had the best sex of your life and your feeling great, your body feels tension free. Why do you think people involved in relationships seem more attractive than people who are not? Because they are getting IT on a regular basis and it shows.”

Neville tried and after many attempts, Mary Sue finally looked satisfied.

“Now, not only do you look sexy, you have to let her feel that you think she is too,” Mary Sue said.

“How?” he asked.

“With a different version of ’the look’. Now that she’s looking back, you should be the one to catch her looking. And when you do, slowly sweep your eyes down to her feet and back to her face, but be carefully not to stop your gaze at any one body part too long. Keep it moving, down and then up. That way you’re complementing her whole body and not just leering at a nice pair of tits. When you reach her eyes again, give her a sexy smile. This time don’t look away first. Most likely she’ll look away, but you can be sure that her nerves will be fluttering.”

Neville listened raptly and then they practiced. His roommates, who had been pretending to do homework a distance away, now looked at him in wonder. Neville really did look like a whole different person. Not that his appearance had changed, but his attitude exuded more confidence than they had ever seen before. Each of them tucked away their own mental notes on Mary Sue’s lesson to practice in private later, perhaps in front of a mirror.

Those lessons, they would all agree, seemed much more valuable than any lesson spread out on the table before them.

OOOOOOOOOOO


A/N Thank you for all your responses to the last chapter. I’m happy people are still enjoying this fiction. I had fun writing this chapter - I’m such a sucker for threesomes and Blaise and Draco, well, need I say more?

I won’t be going into every sex scene with each Gryffindor boy (after all, she‘s going to sleep with each one three nights in a row), but you will get to see her with them all at least once while she serves as matchmaker. There will also be some Draco, Blaise, Pansy, Ginny and Hermione issues to deal with. (he he he)

So, I humbly ask/beg for your reviews and comments. They really do help shape the story. Thanks.
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