rate_review Reviews

oh petalsoft petalsoft, where art thou petalsoft. i really regret not reviewing your stories anytime sooner, consider i been your fan for almost 4 years now, i only start writing back reviews when realizing how much it matters. it's a shame really as many of your stories are my all time favorite, especially this mary sue series. i know i'm only one reviewer, but i hope my words can reach out to you and bring these chapters in ur mind onto papers (and virtual chapters :D )

afterall you haven't done harry's lessons yet ;)

This story is incredible! I really like it, great job!

Chapter 5 - Crying at Snape's mean words.. genius! And, oh my, I hope the Gryffindors fight for her.. I love that she's slutting around.

Oh my god, I totally want more. The chemistry you write into the story is awesome. Amazing. I'm totally gonna be following this story. Also, my fingers are crossed for no sad scenes like her getting taken away.

Where this story has left me feeling --
Relationship-wise: I really want her to end up with Draco or Blaise or Seamus (they all seem like good matches for her, sex-wise.. experienced, take-charge, sexy, devious), minus Draco/Blaise hating Muggles. I'm also hoping that the person she ends up with fights for her (eg. Draco vs Blaise, Seamus vs Draco+Blaise). Seamus seems different from the rest of the Gryffindors, devious and experienced, but also manly and strong, and could totally fight off Draco/Blaise for her. If they ended up together, that would make my life.


Sex-wise:
Really hot scenes with Draco/Blaise/Seamus (individually) taking charge of her, please! Like snatching her away into the Forbidden Forest, secret passageway, under the bleachers of the Quidditch field, and have her begging. For Draco/Blaise, I really like the threesomes she has with them, but it'd be really cool if she had alone time with one/both of them. Also Seamus, when he has his 3 nights with her.. man, I am REALLY looking forward to that.


Overall:
Amazing! Was just looking for smut, but this is so much better. Great plot, good character usage, I'm totally hooked.

I hope you finish this story someday. I'm definitely enjoying it! The fact that you have a bit of plot in there makes it much more interesting, too. And I like how she's actually helping them to get the girls they want.

It occurred to me that if you had summarized it as just a muggle getting into Hogwarts and helping the boys get with the girls they like (through sluttiness! :D), I would have just passed by the story. But the fact that you specifically named her Mary Sue totally caught my interest, so good job on that.

I hope to see more of this some day!

omg i love this story i have read it millions of times!! when are u gonna add another chapter???

Whyever did you drop this story?! It is so funny!

* Giggle * Love it.

This is really well done. Do you plan on continuing at all?

The story was really good, it would be nice to see more of it.