Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

Hi everyone! Here’s the next chapter. Thanks to all of you who are reading and reviewing this story. I’m having fun with it too.

Beta’d by Narcissa Black – thanks!

Disclaimer: I can claim no ownership of the Harry Potter megaverse

Black Jack


That night the boys were so exhausted from their efforts to create Mary Sue’s file the previous night that they retired early to bed. But, as luck would have it, it seemed that this night was fated to be just as busy.

At midnight the door to the Gryffindor boys’ dorm room clicked open and was just as softly shut. Then the heavy thud of someone falling and a female curse of “shit,” rousted some of the sleepy boys in the room and wands began to glow in curiosity. Dean looked down on the floor where Mary Sue had tripped over a shoe and was now sitting and holding her bruised knee.

“Mary Sue?” he said. This roused the other four boys and they all looked at the beautiful girl sitting in the middle of their dorm room in a lavender colored silk nightie that was short enough to reveal most of her legs.

“Sorry, I tripped over a shoe,” she smiled.

“Are you all right?” Neville asked. They all sat up and looked at her in concern.

“Yes, just a little knock to the knee,” she answered. “I didn’t know you’d all be asleep by now. I’ll just leave you in peace.” She began to get up and was stopped by a volley of voices.

“No, it’s all right.”

“I couldn’t sleep anyway.”

“You don’t have to go.”

She looked at them coyly and responded, “Are you sure you’d like me to stay?”

“Of course,” said Ron. “Only a complete idiot would toss you out of a bedroom.”

Mary Sue smiled at Ron and replied, “You’re so sweet.” Ron blushed slightly. Then she said, “I was having trouble falling asleep and I was hoping that perhaps you boys would be up for a game of cards?”

“Cards?” Seamus said with disappointment. Then he shrugged and said, “Why not.” The boys slipped out of bed and joined Mary Sue on the floor in a circle. Mary Sue pulled out a large stack of playing cards from her bag.

“What kind of cards are those?” asked Ron. He had never seen that type before.

“Muggle cards,” Harry answered for her.

“How do we play with them?” Ron inquired further.

“Well,” smiled Mary Sue, happy to know that she knew something that some of these wizards didn’t. “There are many games you can play with these cards. But I think I’m in the mood for Black Jack tonight.”

“Black Jack?” asked Neville with an unsure face.

“Don’t worry Neville,” Seamus said. “If you can count to 21, you’ll be fine.” Neville nodded.

“I’ll be the dealer,” Mary Sue said as she got more comfortable and crossed her legs. Ron was sitting directly across from her and could now see her matching lavender colored panties. He shifted his own legs and pressed his forearms down over his hardening member beneath his pajama bottoms.

“I’ll give everyone two cards, face down. One of my two cards will be face up so that you can try to guess what I have. You’re playing against mine, you see,” she explained. “You peek at your cards and see what you have. When it’s your turn, you can ask for more cards if you need them. Try to get 21 or as close as you can without going over. If you go over, it’s called a bust and you lose. I take my turn last and I have to continue to hit on anything under seventeen, so there is a chance that I’ll bust and everyone else who didn’t bust will win. Otherwise, your hand has to beat my hand in order to win.”

Seamus then added, “Face cards are worth ten and aces are worth a one or an eleven. If you get a ten and an ace, you have a Black Jack and it’s an automatic win.”

“Thank you Seamus,” Mary Sue smiled.

Seamus grinned at her and said, “What I want to know is what we get for winning?”

“We’re not playing for money are we?” Ron asked with a frown.

“Heavens no,” Mary Sue answered. “That would be far too stressful and I just came to have some fun.” She looked around at their faces and then said, “What do you think a just reward would be for winning a hand?”

“A kiss from you,” Seamus said hopefully. The other boys seemed to like this suggestion as they were smiling and nodding.

“Hmmm” Mary Sue said, thinking about it further. “I have a better idea. How about this? If you beat my hand, you can kiss me wherever you want. If I beat your hand, I can kiss you wherever I want. But if you bust, you get nothing. If you tie with me then I’ll let you chose where you want to be kissed and then I’ll tell you where to kiss me.”

“What about a Black Jack?” Harry asked, feeling very excited about Mary Sue’s rewards.

Mary Sue’s smile widened and she said, “Well… for a Black Jack we have to do something more…” They all grew still and waited for her next words. “If you get a Black Jack, then you get to kiss me and touch me at the same time anywhere you want. If I get a Black Jack, then I get to do the same back to you, unless you busted. Does this sound good?”

“Hell yeah,” Seamus said. “Hurry up and deal.” The other boys nodded and watched eagerly as Mary Sue shuffled the cards and began to deal out their first hands.

“Oh, and one more thing,” Mary Sue added. “No magic. You can’t change your cards with magic. That would give you an unfair advantage over me. It’s intimidating enough being surrounded by powerful wizards.” Mary Sue could see that they liked that compliment very much and she had intended for them to feel that way. Stroking the male ego had its advantages.

Mary Sue’s first hand had her at twenty. Neville, Harry and Dean had all busted. Ron tied and Seamus had an eighteen. She smiled at the three who busted and said, “You have to remember that there are more tens in the deck than any other card.” Then she looked at Seamus and said, “Hmm… let’s see. I think I’ll start with your lips.”

The boys all grew quiet as Mary Sue leaned towards Seamus and pressed her lips against his. Seamus put one of his hands on the back of her head and pulled her in for a deeper kiss, trying to slip his tongue into her mouth. Mary Sue backed away and said, “Uh uh uh, no hands unless you get a Black Jack.”

Seamus smiled in mischief, not feeling sorry at all. Ron looked at Mary Sue in anticipation, knowing he was next. Mary Sue turned to him and said, “You tied with me so you get to choose where you want me to kiss you.” Ron swallowed and pointed to his lips. Mary Sue smiled and crawled over towards him. His eyes flicked down towards her cleavage, now showing the delicious hanging mounds when the neckline of the nightie fell away. He pressed further down on his erection as he wet his lips with his tongue and leaned towards her for a kiss. She gently stroked his lips with her tongue and he immediately allowed her entrance, returning her kiss stroke for stroke. He felt dazed when she pulled away and he wanted more of her honey flavored mouth.

Seamus and Harry, who had been sitting on either side of Mary Sue in the circle, now had an excellent view of her lavender knickered rear end as she crawled to Ron and kissed him. Their hands itched to reach up and stroke that silky bottom and smooth thighs so close to them. Seamus ran a hand through his hair and muttered, “Fuck!” as he tried to control his lust. He had to get a Black Jack, and soon!

She backed away from Ron and sat down again saying, “Now it’s my turn to tell you where to kiss me, Ron.” She smiled and put her finger on the side of her neck. “I love having my neck kissed.”

Ron swallowed and crawled across the circle to her this time, unable to hide his erect cock trying to poke through his pajama bottoms. His lips descended onto her neck and he inhaled the scent of her hair and skin as he kissed and licked at the soft skin. He felt her moan and the sound rumbled through her throat making his lips vibrate. He wished he could continue to crawl forward until she was pushed onto her back and laying beneath him.

“Come on, let’s have another hand,” Dean said impatiently.

Mary Sue put her hands on Ron’s shoulders and lightly pushed him back. “Time to play some more,” she smiled. Ron sighed and backed away to his spot, giving Dean a dirty look.

The boys were all very cautious not to bust on the next hand and were delighted when Mary Sue had a Black Jack. “Oh! I get to touch and kiss all of you!” she exclaimed. She looked around the circle, “Where should I start?” She smiled at Harry and then moved behind his back. She snaked her arms around his chest and began kissing Harry’s neck and moving her hands about his chest as she did so. Harry closed his eyes a moment and savored the feel of her around him and her lips and tongue on his neck. His face automatically twisted towards hers and she moved her mouth to his lips as her hands unbuttoned his pajama top and began moving over the smooth skin of his chest. He groaned in pleasure as she deepened the kiss and he wanted to pull her in front of him so he could touch her too. Then she stopped and with one more peck she released him and went behind Dean.

Dean waited in excitement, thinking that she would start touching him as she had just touched Harry. He was surprised when he felt her lifting his pajama top up and he automatically put his arms in the air to help her in her goal of removing it completely. Everyone else watched expectantly, their arousals growing in anticipation.

Mary Sue urged Dean to lie backwards on the ground and with a smile she lowered her face to his chest. Long licks with her pink tongue against his dark skin followed her hands as she explored his chest and nipples. Dean closed his eyes and let out a sigh of pleasure as she flicked and laved each of his nipples, her long hair flowing over his chest and tickling him exquisitely.

It was over much too fast in his opinion and she moved over to Ron, kneeling before him and urging him to kneel facing her as well. She scooted her body up against his and felt his hard member pressing onto her stomach as she put her arms around him and kissed him deeply on the lips. Her hands began to move down his back as they snogged until they were both cupping and squeezing his arse cheeks. He groaned and placed his hands around her, cupping her arse in return and grinding his erection harder against her. She pulled back and said, “You’re not supposed to touch me unless you have a Black Jack.”

Ron stared at her dumbly, his mind no longer working right after the kissing and groping. She patted his cheek and moved away, heading next towards Neville. Neville was breathing hard and almost shaking as the beautiful girl came before him. He had never even kissed anyone before.

Mary Sue could sense his nervousness and decided to take it slow with him. She had him kneel as Ron had and put her arms about his neck, pulling him in for soft kisses. When he had the hang of it, she deepened the kiss and began stroking Neville with her tongue on his lips. He opened his mouth and quickly caught on to what he was supposed to be doing, imitating her with his own tongue and lips. Mary Sue ran her fingers through his hair as she kissed him and pressed her breasts against him, moving them so that the friction of the material between them made her nipples into hard peaks. When she had finished her long snog with Neville, she turned to Seamus who was grinning at her in mischief.

She suspected that Seamus most likely had the most experience out of the five boys and knew she could do a bit more with him. She went behind Seamus’ back and had him kneel up as she kneeled behind him, wrapping her arms about him as she did with Harry and kissing the back of his neck, biting and licking him just under the hair line. Her hands then slid downwards over his ribs and stomach until they were on either side of his tenting erection. The other boys swallowed in anticipation and felt their pulses pound quickly when her fingers moved onto Seamus’ hard arousal over his pajama bottoms.

Seamus had his eyes closed and he pushed his hips forward a bit, trying to get her to use more pressure on him as he groaned, “Yes, baby, like that.”

Mary Sue smiled behind his back, her lips still kissing his warm neck as she took one of her hands and moved it up, slipping it into the waistband of his bottoms and moving it down towards his cock.

“Merlin!” exclaimed Ron from across the circle. Mary Sue was touching Seamus’ bare cock! They all shifted where they sat, wanting to touch their own cocks for relief from this teasing.

But then Mary Sue let go of Seamus and went back to her place. Seamus groaned in disappointment and said, “Damn, you can’t stop there!”

“It’s time to play some more,” she smiled.

“Just wait until I get a Black Jack, Mary Sue,” Seamus said. “My hand won’t stop until you’re screaming my name.”

Everyone looked at Seamus in shock and Mary Sue gasped and giggled. “Oh my,” she said, “I better watch out for you.”

“Yes, you should,” Seamus replied.

The next hand had Mary Sue at nineteen and Neville and Harry both having a Black Jack. Seamus and Ron busted while Dean had an eighteen. Mary Sue took care of Dean first by kissing his bare chest again and trailing her tongue down towards his belly button making him suck in his breath. She was so close to where he fantasized about having her! She looked up at his face and knew what he was thinking. Her hot mouth was so close to the bulge in his pajama bottoms, he could feel her hot breath through the fabric. She placed one kiss over his hard member and his groan was not the only one heard in the room.

Then she went to Neville and said, “Well Neville, you had a Black Jack. So you get to kiss and touch me wherever you want.” Neville couldn’t speak and only nodded, his breaths coming out in little pants as he knelt and pulled her to his body for a deep kiss as they had shared last time. This time, however, he tentatively moved his hands down to her arse and began to grasp and knead it while he kissed her deeply.

Harry was growing impatient for his turn and he edge a little closer to the two of them saying, “My turn.”

Mary Sue pulled away from Neville and gave him a smile saying, “You’re becoming a good kisser, Neville.” He grinned and blushed at the compliment as she left his arms.

Harry didn’t wait for her to turn around as he already was kneeling behind her and all he had to do was slip his arms around her waist and pull her for more snuggling against the front of his body, his lips descending onto her sensitive neck. He kissed up the side of her neck and to her ear, making Mary Sue moan and push her bottom back against his straining arousal. She could sense that he wanted her lips as he moved his kisses along her jaw line and she turned her head backwards and connected her lips with his in a hot wet kiss.

Harry’s hands on her stomach began moving and his fingers bunched the material of her nightie up, exposing the front of her knickers to the rest of the boys who were so randy by now that they didn’t care if anyone saw them touch themselves at this point. Some moved their hands over their cocks as they watched Harry’s hands slip under her nightie and move up towards her breasts. Keeping his mouth on hers in a deep kiss, Harry moved his hands over her beautiful breasts and Mary Sue moaned and curved her back, pushing her breasts out further into his grasp.

Ron wiped his mouth thinking that he surely must be drooling by now. He had to get a Black Jack tonight! He just had to!

“Nice,” Seamus muttered, rubbing himself through his bottoms. The only thing better would be if Harry had pulled her top off and they could see everything he was doing to her breasts under that nightie. But Seamus suspected that Harry wouldn’t do that to Mary Sue without her permission, so he had to be content with watching Harry’s hands moving under the fabric and hearing the mews and moans of Mary Sue while her little knickered hips moved in a circle against Harry’s arousal.

After a long while, Mary Sue gently pulled Harry’s hands down and broke the kiss telling him that they needed to continue the game.

“Yeah, Harry,” Ron said. “You can’t hog her to yourself.”

The next hand produced two more Black Jacks by Ron and Seamus. Mary Sue squinted in suspicion. “Are you sure you boys aren’t using magic?”

Seamus jumped up and turned around. “Look, no wand anywhere.” Then he grabbed his crotch and smiled, “Except for this one.”

Mary Sue kissed the other winners soundly before turning to Seamus and Ron. “Who’s first?” she asked.

“Hold on,” Seamus said as he went over to Ron and whispered in his ear. Ron looked at Seamus in surprise and then nodded as he turned red a bit. Mary Sue looked at them curiously.

“Lie down, Mary Sue,” Seamus said.

“You know that you can only use hands and mouths don’t you?” she said.

“Yes, we know,” Seamus grinned. “We’ll follow the rules. You said we can kiss you anywhere, right?”

“Yes,” she said slowly.

“Seamus,” Harry said, “maybe you should ask her before you do something more than what we’ve been doing.”

“It’s okay, Harry,” Mary Sue said. “I’ve taken certain liberties with all of you. I suppose it’s only fair. I don’t think any of you would hurt me.”

“Hurt you?” Seamus said in surprise. “No, Mary Sue, only make you feel good, real good.”

Mary Sue nodded and went into the center of the circle. She lay down on her back, her knees bent, and waited. “Well?” she said.

Ron sat on one side of her and Seamus sat on the other. Ron bent over her face and began kissing Mary Sue’s lips while one of his hands rested on her belly but soon began its slow way towards her breasts.

Mary Sue jumped a bit when she felt Seamus’ mouth kissing at the smooth skin of her stomach, sending a wealth of warm tingling sensations towards her core in anticipation. Ron had pulled up her nightie and slipped his hand underneath as Harry had done, groaning when he felt her bare breasts in his hand. He ran the tip of his finger across one nipple, enjoying how hard he could make it, while he continued to kiss her deeply.

Meanwhile, Seamus’ hand landed on her knee and began to slowly caress its way down one thigh, his fingertips on the inside of the leg where she was most sensitive. Ron’s mouth left hers and began to work its way down her sensitive neck, licking and biting softly while Seamus’ mouth descended lower over the edge of her knickers, but not where she wanted it most. His hand, however, was almost there. She groaned and turned her head to look at the other boys, her eyelids heavy with lust. They were all breathing hard and watching everything the two boys were doing to her.

She jolted when she felt Seamus’ hand lay on top of her soaked panties, pushing against her with his palm as his lips lowered more. He spread his fingers and she felt his tongue snake out over her pleasure nub through her knickers and she grabbed onto Ron’s hair and moaned. This urged Ron on further and he began to kiss down the top of her nightie and over her breast, pulling up her nightie and exposing her to the air. Neville looked frozen in place as he watched Ron take her nipple into his mouth and suckle it while he moved the other around with his hand.

Seamus now slipped a finger under the elastic, stroking her wet entrance. Then he hooked the finger in the crotch of her knickers and pulled it aside, descending on her swollen folds with his mouth and sliding his hot tongue up and down the crevasse while Mary Sue gasped and moaned. She automatically opened her legs wider, giving Seamus better access while thrusting her breasts higher into Ron’s hot mouth.

Seamus now stuck two fingers into her passage and adjusted his other arm across her belly so he could use the hand to keep the material of her knickers out of the way while he flicked his tongue at her clit and sucked at her aroused nub. He kept pumping his fingers in and out of her as the other boys watched in shocked fascination. It was obvious that Seamus had the most experience out of the bunch. Even Harry, who had a good view of what Seamus was doing, could barely breathe as he watched Mary Sue writhing in pleasure. It was the hottest thing he had ever seen in his life.

When her noises were becoming more frantic, Ron moved his mouth back onto hers, muffling her screams with a kiss. Seamus let her ride out her orgasm on his two fingers and then pulled them out, letting her knickers fall back into place. He placed his fingers in his mouth and smiled as he sucked them clean.

Mary Sue pulled her nightie back down over her breasts and sat up as the boys moved away. She was flushed and breathing hard as they all were. “My,” she panted, “that was… incredible.”

“Yeah,” agreed Dean, his jaw still hanging open.

“I think I’ll be able to sleep now,” she said as she tried to calm herself.

She gathered her cards and their faces fell as they realized she was about to leave. “It’s getting late, boys. We should get some rest before class starts tomorrow. Maybe we can play some more games tomorrow night?”

“Oh yeah,” Harry said. They were all nodding in agreement.

She smiled as she stood and gathered her bag to herself. “I’ll come back under one condition.”

“What?” Neville asked, willing to promise anything at this point.

“You tell no one what we have done or what we will be doing. If I hear one word about it outside of this room, then my visits stop,” Mary Sue announced.

“We promise,” they said, almost in unison. Then she gave them the brightest smile and said, “That’s good. Because you boys are so much fun and I want to continue playing with you.” She kissed her hand and blew it towards them just before she left the room.

It seemed they all let out their breaths at that time, too shocked and too horny to talk to each other. All five of them made a quick retreat to their own beds, shutting their drapes and putting silencing spells up. There was nothing else for it but to wank and dream of Mary Sue.


OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

A/N Naughty Mary Sue, LOL. Yes, she’ll get even bolder. Hope you enjoyed this, please let me know.

P.S. A moderator keeps sticking this story under the Mary Sue category, so if it disappears and you’re looking for it then check there. Thanks!