More Than Friends
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Harry Potter › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
Views:
17,085
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Category:
Harry Potter › Threesomes/Moresomes
Rating:
Adult ++
Chapters:
5
Views:
17,085
Reviews:
14
Recommended:
0
Currently Reading:
0
Disclaimer:
I do not own Harry Potter, nor any of the characters from the books or movies. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
msg to Anon's
Hi peoples.
Firstly I 'd like to apologise to those who thought this was Chapter 2. This is a message responding to reviews left by Anon and Anon.
"Anon 2006-01-11 id # 2035590695
The story had potential but all the gramatical errors and missing words made it hard to get through. Don't get me wrong, I liked it. But it'd be nice if you could proofread before posting.
Anon 2006-01-22 id # 2035612776
Well the storyline has potential; it's intriguing enough to make me want to come back and find out what Harry and Ron's great plan is. However, your vow to not post until it's ready to post should include spellchecking and proofreading for grammar. The spelling and grammatical errors make me think you are a teenager dabbling in writing and this is your first fanfic. Good potential, just tighten up and keep working on it. I will be back to read more."
I would just like to ask that you point out these spelling and grammar errors to me. I find it frustrating that I go back to look for them (beacuase you said they're there) I can't find any (I did pass English), and Spellcheck can't find any either. I really do want to post quality writing (minimum errors) for people to read cause I like to read quality writing too. So please be specific when pointing out these errors to me (you can email me if you prefer). Alternatively, you could be brave and leave your email.
I apologise again for wasting everyone else's time.
Paige
ps-this is not my first fanfic (you numbskull), check out the author's page.
Firstly I 'd like to apologise to those who thought this was Chapter 2. This is a message responding to reviews left by Anon and Anon.
"Anon 2006-01-11 id # 2035590695
The story had potential but all the gramatical errors and missing words made it hard to get through. Don't get me wrong, I liked it. But it'd be nice if you could proofread before posting.
Anon 2006-01-22 id # 2035612776
Well the storyline has potential; it's intriguing enough to make me want to come back and find out what Harry and Ron's great plan is. However, your vow to not post until it's ready to post should include spellchecking and proofreading for grammar. The spelling and grammatical errors make me think you are a teenager dabbling in writing and this is your first fanfic. Good potential, just tighten up and keep working on it. I will be back to read more."
I would just like to ask that you point out these spelling and grammar errors to me. I find it frustrating that I go back to look for them (beacuase you said they're there) I can't find any (I did pass English), and Spellcheck can't find any either. I really do want to post quality writing (minimum errors) for people to read cause I like to read quality writing too. So please be specific when pointing out these errors to me (you can email me if you prefer). Alternatively, you could be brave and leave your email.
I apologise again for wasting everyone else's time.
Paige
ps-this is not my first fanfic (you numbskull), check out the author's page.