Mary Sue Comes to Hogwarts

Hi everyone! Sorry for the delay. I’ve been working on my other fictions as well. Hope you enjoy the latest chapter of Mary Sue’s adventure. Sorry if there are any errors, I read this over late at night when I was tired. But I’ll catch them eventually. Enjoy!

Disclaimer: I can claim no ownership of the characters or places used in this fiction.


Magical Me


The five Gryffindor boys were exhausted, after the sleepless night of fixing a file for Mary Sue, when they came to the Great Hall for breakfast. Harry and Ron sat down across from Lavender and Hermione who now looked at the boys in question.

“What happened to you? You don’t look too well,” Lavender commented.

“Sleepless night,” Ron mumbled, pouring a cup of coffee.

“For all of you?” Hermione asked.

“Yeah,” Ron said. “We got carried away talking about our summers.”

“Well that was foolish,” Hermione said. “You knew classes started today.”

Ron didn’t say anything to that comment. Harry looked up and down the Gryffindor table and said, “Where’s Mary Sue?”

“I don’t know and I don’t care,” Hermione said coolly.

Ron looked up at her with a frown, “What’s your problem?”

“Nothing,” Hermione said. “If you want to find her, you should probably check the girl’s bathroom. I’m sure she’s still fussing with her hair and make-up.”

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Mary Sue looked at the time and hurried out of the Gryffindor common room. Everyone seemed to have left for breakfast already and she regretted that she took so long to get ready as there was no one around to give her directions to the Great Hall. She ran down a few staircases and then had to grab onto a banister when one started moving right under her feet.

“Oh dear,” she said. “This is so darn confusing. How does anyone find their way around here?” As soon as the staircase landed she walked onto the next one which also started to move.

Draco and Blaise were just exiting the Great Hall and heading for the passageway down to the dungeons when they looked up and spotted her riding the staircases in frustration.

“Nice,” Draco said, spotting his prey. “No other Gryffindorks around.”

“I think we need to help our damsel in distress,” Blaise grinned.

“Miss Perfect?” Draco called up.

Mary Sue looked over the banister and noticed the two handsome boys down below, one of them she already knew.

“Oh! Mr. Malfoy, I so glad you’re here,” Mary Sue said with a needy look. “I can’t seem to figure out the stairs.”

“Just stay where you are and we’ll come to you,” Draco said. He could have told her what to do, but coming to the rescue was much more fun. They easily maneuvered their way to her with grins on their faces.

“Have you been riding the staircases all through breakfast?” Draco smiled.

Mary Sue felt all fluttery when in the presence of handsome guys and these two were making her knees tremble. She was now grateful for the long robes that hid her distress.
“Well, not that long,” she smiled. “But it was worth it if it meant having two handsome gentlemen come to my rescue.”

Blaise was so struck by her beauty he forgot to introduce himself. When her eyes shifted to him, he remembered his manners and said, “I’m Blaise Zabini. But please, just call me Blaise.” He took her hand and raised it slowly to his lips, his dark brown eyes on hers the whole time. His lips were warm on her skin as he kissed her fingers and Mary Sue had images in her mind of dragging these two back up to her dorm room and never letting them out.

“And you must call me Draco,” the blond boy said.

Her pulse was pounding; they stood so close to her. Blaise had lowered her hand but he had not released it. His thumb was making light circles on her palm and it was sending tingles up her arm. “Well,” Mary Sue said, hoping her voice did not sound as shaky as she felt. “Then you’ll have to call me Mary Sue.”

Draco held out his arm for her to take and said, “Shall we?”

Blaise slipped his arm around hers on one side and Draco took her other arm in his. The smell of their expensive colognes hit her senses and her heart sped up. She could feel the strength in their arms and tried to imagine what wonderful physiques lay hidden under their robes. But Mary Sue had good senses when it came to boys and she knew that these two could only be played with so far. Guys like them liked to be in control. And Mary Sue liked to have the upper hand in relationships. The Gryffindor boys were much more controllable. With Draco and Blaise, she knew she’d have to be more careful.

“I don’t know what I would have done if you two hadn’t come along,” she said as they guided her down. ‘The helpless female act gets them every time,’ Mary Sue thought.

“It’s a big castle,” Blaise said. “It takes some getting used to. Perhaps I can give you a tour after classes end today if you wish?” He looked at her hopefully with a sexy smile on his face. Blaise could see Draco frowning at him over Mary Sue’s head, but he ignored it.

“Would you?” Mary Sue said excitedly. “That’s so sweet of you.” She turned her face towards Draco’s side and said, “Will you be coming too, Draco?”

Draco grinned and then flashed Blaise a smug look as he answered, “I’d love to come.” Blaise looked like he wanted to murder him.

They stopped just outside the Great Hall and said, “Then it’s a date. I’ll meet you right at this spot after classes.”

They both kissed her hands at the same time and Draco said, “See you then, if not before in one of our classes.”

Mary Sue let out a big breath as she watched them walk away. She entered the Great Hall and saw all the Gryffindors gathered around Professor McGonagall as she handed out their class schedules.

“Darn, I missed breakfast,” she mumbled as she made her way over to the crowd. Harry and Ron spotted her and came next to her. Harry took her arm and pulled her away from the crowd for a moment.

“I almost thought you wouldn’t show up on time,” he said in a low voice.

“I was having a hard time figuring out the stairs,” she whispered back. “Did you complete my file?”

“Yeah,” Harry answered. “And it was delivered to McGonagall at breakfast. I saw her looking through it while she ate.”

“You think this will work?” she worried.

“We sure hope so,” Ron whispered.

“Listen, Mary Sue, I’ve got my class schedule so I’m going to pretend to go off to class. Then I’ll put my invisibility cloak on and come back here. When McGonagall leads you away, I’ll follow. Don’t get surprised when I whisper in your ear, all right?”

“Aren’t you going to miss your class?” she asked.

“Some of it I suppose, but don’t worry about me,” Harry said.

“Harry?” Mary Sue said and kissed him on the cheek. “Thank you.”

Harry blushed and said, “No problem.”

“What about me?” Ron said. “I’ve been up all night too.”

Mary Sue smiled at him and kissed his cheek as well.

Ron blushed and then felt Hermione ramming into his arm as she passed by. He turned to follow Hermione out of the Great Hall calling out, “Hey, Hermione! What’s your problem?”

“All right, I’m going too,” Harry said. “But I’ll be right back.”

McGonagall finished handing out the schedules and turned to Mary Sue. “Follow me Miss Perfect.” She breezed by Mary Sue and Mary Sue lagged behind a bit.

“Harry?” she whispered. “Are you here?”

“Yeah,” he whispered behind her.

It was so strange to have an invisible boy following her but then there were many strange things in this magical castle. The talking portraits really freaked her out and the ghosts set her on edge as well.

Professor McGonagall turned around and said, “Hurry along, Miss Perfect.”

“Yes, Professor,” Mary Sue replied, speeding her pace.

McGonagall looked at her and said, “What career are you aiming for?”

“Oh, well,” Mary Sue threw up her hands, “I’d really like to be an…” She listened carefully as Harry was trying to whisper something in her ear. “…an arbor.”

McGonagall looked at her with lifted brows, “An arbor, Miss. Perfect? I didn’t realize a yard structure was one of the choices.”

Harry was desperately trying to whisper that blasted word again and Mary Sue said, “Excuse me, Professor,” she laughed. “I meant an auror.”

“I see,” McGonagall said. “I received your file this morning. It seems you’ve done quite well on your O.W.L.’s.”

“I have?” she asked, not sure what those were. ‘Owls? What in the world did Harry put in her file about owls?’ she wondered.

“Yes,” McGonagall said. “I think you may be able to pursue that career path. But I still would like to test your transfiguration skills this morning as that is my subject.” They finally reached a room on the fourth floor that contained all sorts of left items. There were racks of uniforms and robes, shelves of books and equipment. McGonagall grabbed some clothing saying, “These look to be your size. Go ahead and try them on behind the screen.”

Mary Sue took the uniform and looked around. Finding the screen, she went behind and began taking off her clothing.

Harry had been standing by the door under his cloak when Mary Sue went to dress and the thought of taking a peek at her crossed his mind. He knew it was wrong to spy, but he was just a guy after all. He quietly walked to the opening of the screen and peered behind. He almost gave himself away when he gave a small groan at the beautiful sight of Mary Sue standing there in her knickers and bra.

McGonagall heard the groan and looked at the screen, “Is everything all right, Miss Perfect?”

“Yes, Professor,” she said. She had heard the groan as well and she knew exactly who had made it and why. She smiled to herself and decided to give Harry a little show. She placed both her hands on her bare stomach and began caressing her midriff as she looked in a mirror. Her hands went up to her breasts, squeezing and kneading them over her bra top. She closed her eyes and put her head back as if she had a lover pleasuring her.

Harry could feel himself sweating under the robe and he held his hand over his mouth so McGonagall couldn’t hear his hard breathing. Mary Sue had the perfect body and her skin looked so very touchable. He had to lean against the wall for support as his other hand found its way into his pants, stroking his aching cock as Mary Sue’s hands now traveled down over her belly again. ‘Oh Merlin,’ Harry thought, ‘she’s going to touch herself.’

Mary Sue slid one hand back over her arse crack and the other she lowered onto the top of her pussy. She stuck her bottom out and began rubbing both sides at the same time while she bit her bottom lip and closed her eyes.

Harry’s hand began moving faster as he watched her. Fuck! He couldn’t stop! She was too damn hot! His face was turning red from holding his breath and when he came he couldn’t help the gasp that he released.

“Miss Perfect?” McGonagall said. “Are you all right?”

“Yes, Professor,” Mary Sue said, throwing the uniform on in a hurry. “I’m sorry, I just stubbed my toe.”

When she came out from behind the screen, McGonagall took a look at her and said, “That looks about right. I’ll just make a few adjustments.” She took out her wand and waved it towards the surprised girl. Mary Sue saw the uniform transform to look like new. She was amazed to say the least.

“Oh, thank you, Professor,” she smiled. “That was very clever.”

She handed Mary Sue some books for her book bag and a few other items. Mary Sue packed it all in and followed McGonagall out into the hall and to her office.

“Have a seat,” McGonagall said, indicating a chair across from her desk. Mary Sue sat down and she felt Harry brush his hand against her shoulder to let her know he was right behind her.

McGonagall gave her a wand and said, “Let’s try this one out.”

Mary Sue held it up and looked nervously at the professor. “What would you like me to do?” she asked.

“Why don’t you show me some of your higher level transfiguration spells?” McGonagall requested.

“All right,” Mary Sue said. She heard Harry whisper, “Stand up.”

Mary Sue waved her wand at Professor McGonagall and said, “Stand up.” McGonagall frowned at her and she heard Harry whisper, “No, I meant YOU stand up.”

Mary Sue laughed and said, “Just a little joke, Professor.” McGonagall did not look amused. Mary Sue stood up and waited for Harry to say more.

“Point the wand at her desk and say, ‘Hippotamai Seridem,’” Harry whispered.

Mary Sue pointed at McGonagall’s desk and said, “Hippotamai Seridem.” McGonagall fell backwards in her chair with a yelp as a hippopotamus now stood in the place of her desk, grunting and eyeing her nervously as it shifted its large rear.

“I did it!” Mary Sue said. Then she remembered that McGonagall had fallen and she ran around the other side of the hippo and bent over to help the professor up. “Professor, I’m so sorry. Here, let me help you.”

McGonagall stood and pushed her crooked glasses straight again. Waving her wand, she transfigured the hippo back into her desk. “Well, Miss Perfect,” McGonagall said, slightly out of breath. “I see you do have some skill after all.”

Mary Sue smiled in delight. “Would you like me to do something else?”

“No, no,” McGonagall said quickly, “I think it’s much too early in the day for surprises like that. I think all is in order now.” McGonagall grabbed a parchment and tapped it with her wand. “Here is your class schedule. You should be in potions now. Here’s a late pass and a map of the school. You’ll find your potions class down here in the dungeon.” McGonagall pointed at a spot on the map and ushered Mary Sue out the door.

“Thank you, Professor,” Mary Sue called out with a wave as she left the office.

McGonagall closed the door and leaned against it with a heavy sigh.

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Mary Sue walked away from McGonagall’s office and looked around the empty hall. “Harry?” she whispered.

Suddenly Harry appeared as he threw off the invisibility cloak. Mary Sue yelped in surprise at his sudden appearance.

“Sorry,” he smiled. “You did well.”

Mary Sue threw her arms around him. “Thank you, Harry.” She pulled him into a tight hug and Harry groaned, sniffing the floral scent of her hair.

When she let him go he said, “Let me see your schedule.” He looked over her classes and said, “Excellent. You’re in all my classes. That’s why I told you to say you wanted to be an auror. I need to be in your classes if I’m going to help you out.”

“I don’t know what an auror is, but I suppose it’s better than being an arbor,” she laughed.

“Yeah, probably,” Harry smiled. Harry led the way to the dungeons, taking his time for a few reasons. First, he wanted more time with Mary Sue. Second, he wasn’t anxious for the barbs and certain detention thrown at him by Snape when he showed up late.

They passed an empty classroom and Mary Sue pulled on Harry’s arm saying, “Come in here for a moment, Harry.” Harry’s heart began racing again as Mary Sue closed the door and looked at him suggestively. “I just want you to know how grateful I am for all you’re doing for me.”

“Well… it’s… it’s…” Harry sputtered as Mary Sue wrapped her arms about his neck and pulled him in for a kiss. It was a short, sweet kiss and she was now looking into his eyes but not letting go around his neck. Her body was pressed snuggly against him and Harry did what came naturally. He wrapped his arms around her and pulled her even tighter against his body as he brought his lips down for a longer kiss.

Mary Sue moaned into his mouth and opened her lips. Harry followed suit and their tongues caressed each others sweetly. Then Mary Sue pulled back and Harry felt bereft at the loss. “You’re a nice kisser, Harry,” she smiled as she picked up her bag again.

Harry wondered how she could be so casual about it. His body was on fire right now. But he wasn’t the type to push so he let out a breath and said, “Thanks, so are you.” He had a feeling that Mary Sue had kissed a lot of boys. But he didn’t mind too much; as long as he got to be one of them.

They left the classroom and headed once more towards the dungeons. “I should go in first. Wait about five minutes and then come in,” Harry said.

“Why should you go in first?” Mary Sue asked.

“Because I don’t want you to hear what Snape will say to me,” Harry smiled. “He doesn’t like me very much to begin with.”

“Oh, all right,” she smiled. “I don’t know how anyone could not like you though.” She stroked his cheek affectionately and Harry swallowed his urge to grab her against his body again. He turned quickly and entered the classroom.

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Draco and Blaise didn’t care for the fact that Mary Sue was sticking to Potter and Weasley like glue all through classes and lunch as well. The only good thing about it was that it seemed to be royally pissing off Granger as she huffed and pouted all day.

“What can we do?” Blaise told Draco as they waited for her to show up outside of the Great Hall. “She’s in Gryffindor after all.”

“Yeah, well she’s much too good for them,” Draco grumped. “We’ve got to really impress her today, Blaise. I don’t want her anxious to go back to those two mop heads.”

“No seduction?” Blaise asked.

“I didn’t say that,” Draco smiled. “But only if she’s receptive to it. We can’t scare her away by over doing it. Let her take the lead, at least for today,” Draco grinned.

Blaise nudged him to be quiet as Mary Sue approached. “Hi guys!” she smiled. “Sorry I was late. I’m still trying to find my way around.”

“Understandable,” Blaise said, flashing his beautiful smile at her. “That’s what we’re here for. Ready to go?”

“Of course,” she smiled, placing her arms through theirs again. ‘These two are so yummy. I better watch myself,’ Mary Sue thought.

They spent the better part of an hour walking around the castle and telling her tidbits of history. It really was fascinating, except that her mind kept imagining these two naked and doing naughty things with her.

At last they took her outside to show her around the grounds. She gawked once more at Hagrid as he tended his garden and was delighted when the boys told her that there were real mermaids in the lake. Harry and Ron had coached her earlier not to act surprised at magical things if she didn’t want to appear like a muggle. So she kept her looks of surprise to a minimum and believed every outrageous thing that they told her.

When they reached a pretty spot near the lake Draco said, “Would you like to rest awhile?”

“That sounds like a wonderful idea,” Mary Sue replied. Her feet were killing her after all the sightseeing. Draco and Blaise removed their cloaks and spread them on the grass for them all to sit on. Mary Sue felt a shiver of excitement as she could now see their bodies better with the cloaks gone. Tapered waists, toned muscles, tight asses, they had it all in their favor. She wanted to lie back and throw out her arms and scream, “TAKE ME!”

She took off her cloak as well. It was a sunny September day and she wanted to show some of her curves off. It was only fair. The boys grew quiet as they watched her and Mary Sue knew she had them exactly where she wanted them. She kicked off her stiff shoes, stretching her legs out in front of her and leaned back on her hands, turning her face up to the sky to soak up the warmth. “Mmmmmm,” she moaned, “the sun feels so good.”

Inwardly she was smiling as she absolutely knew what she was doing to them. She didn’t have to open her eyes to know that they were checking out her shirt as it stretched across her breasts, gaping open between buttons as if ready to pop. She knew they were checking out her legs as she crossed them prettily at the ankles.

“I can’t believe you wore those shoes the whole time,” Draco said, picking up the dressy pump. “Your feet must be very sore.”

“Yes,” she said. “The pain girls will suffer in order to be pretty.”

When she felt strong hands pick up one foot and begin kneading and massaging it, she opened her eyes and saw that Draco was now seated at her feet, facing her. He smiled as he twisted and rubbed her stiff foot. “Feel good?” he smiled.

“Feels heavenly,” she purred, closing her eyes again and enjoying his attentions. Then she felt hands on her shoulders and neck massaging her and she knew that Blaise had moved himself behind her back. “Oh, that feels so good,” she moaned.

Blaise bent his head forward and whispered in her ear, “I can’t let Draco have all the fun.” His hot breath on her ear made her shiver.

“If giving massages are fun, then you can have all the fun you want with me,” she said. She knew the double meaning of the comment would get a response, and it did.

“Is that a promise?” Draco asked. She opened her eyes and looked at his mischievous expression.

“I never make promises, Mr. Malfoy,” she teased, closing her eyes again. She felt she could stay here forever with these two making her feel so good.

“So, Mary Sue,” Draco continued. “Tell us about your family.”

“What do you want to know?” she said drowsily, still keeping her eyes closed. “I’m an only child.”

“Is your father a wizard?” Draco asked.

She wondered what they were getting at. Did they know she was a muggle? Maybe one of Harry’s roommates blabbed. She decided to lie. “Yes,” she said, glad her eyes were shut at the moment.

Blaise leaned towards her ear again and asked, “Is your mother a witch?”

It was easier to lie a second time. “Yes,” she said.

It seemed she heard a sigh of relief from Draco and he said, “That’s good.” Mary Sue felt thrilled that they believed her.

“Mary Sue,” a voice called out from the side. She opened her eyes and found Ron and Harry standing about ten feet away, staring at them as if Blaise and Draco had just bludgeoned her with daggers.

“Could you two please give Miss Perfect a break from your stalking?” Draco sneered.

“Fuck you, Malfoy,” Ron snapped.

“In your wildest dreams,” Draco replied.

“What’s the matter?” Mary Sue asked Ron and Harry. They seemed so upset.

“We’ve been looking all over for you,” Harry said. “You asked for help with your homework, remember?”

“Oh, I forgot how late it’s getting,” she said. “Draco and Blaise were giving me a tour of Hogwarts.”

“Yeah, it looks like it,” Ron said with an angry glare at Malfoy and Zabini.

“Oh, stop Ron,” Mary Sue laughed. “It’s true. We only sat down to rest a short while ago.”

“You two run along,” Draco sneered. “We’ll bring Mary Sue back to Gryffindor.”

“No, it’s all right, Draco,” she said as she began to move her feet off his lap and put her shoes back on. “I’ll just head back with them.” Blaise and Draco looked disappointed and she knew exactly why. But making them wait for more was always a good ploy in making boys crazy for you.

They all stood up and gathered their robes from the grass. Mary Sue turned to them and said, “Thank you both for the tour and the massages.” She leaned forward meaning to give Blaise a kiss on his cheek but he turned his face quickly and had his lips there instead. She pecked him on the lips and giggled, “Tricky, tricky.” He smiled back at her in mischief.

Then she turned to Draco and she said, “Can I expect you to trick me as well?”

“Most definitely,” he smiled.

She didn’t bother with his cheek and gave him a sweet peck on the lips as well.

Ron and Harry were glaring angrily at Draco and Blaise when Mary Sue had her back turned to them. When she turned around to go to them, their faces became normal. “Let’s go,” she smiled.

As they walked away Ron turned his head and gave a smug look back at Draco and Blaise. Draco flipped him off.

“This is war, Blaise,” Draco said as he continued glaring at the backs of Harry and Ron. “They are not getting Mary Sue.”

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A/N Hope you liked that! Next time Mary Sue ‘thanks’ the Gryffindor boys for all their help.

Please review this chapter and let me know what you think. Also, I’m open to pairing suggestions as well as long as it’s other students. I don’t do sex scenes between teachers and students. Just seems wrong to me. (I used to be a teacher.)