A Muddy Secret
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Harry Potter › Het - Male/Female › Lucius/Hermione
Rating:
Adult +
Chapters:
20
Views:
20,444
Reviews:
219
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Currently Reading:
1
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Chapter XX
Lovely Reviewers:
Mehuh - I hope that you do refind it, it is now complete. I could tell that you liked it.
andarte - They're good company. The finale! BOOMSY! YAY! *dances around*
Jaime - Poor Lucius.
meankitty69 - *psychotic Bellatrix-just-killed-Sirius-Black cackling*
Voracious Reader - Could Lucius be naked while he gives me a backrub? That would be HOT! Could I sit on his lap? That would be comfort enough for me. Sitting on Lucius' lap. *sighs*
Apple - Don't I always?
Citten - Mel Brooks is great. I love Robin Hood Men in Tights and Spaceballs and Young Frankenstein! I must have missed the vampire bug that is the popular thing these days...I only really like Van Helsing as far as Vampires go. I like them just fine, but I can't get into lots of Vampire books. Anne Rice's work is kind of irritating to me. I do not care for a work to particularly address me as the reader. Poe is one of the few exceptions to that rule ("The Tell Tale Heart" is BRILLIANT! You can read it online if you haven't read it). Poe is an exception to almost every rule I have though. He is too amazing...Last (and perhaps the only) good American poet. Just read on.
Lyssander - Indeed. And perhaps getting a bit scarier.
Utopia - Well, the next chapter should prove interesting, I am hoping. It is the last for this part. I have less of an idea for the sequel(s) than I did for this. That should be fun to write. It will at the very least surprise me as much as you. Inadvertantly, you have helped me in the idea for one of the versions. I'm excited for them! SQUEE! I am also excited for your Lucius/Hermione. SQUEE! It will be AWESOME! I can tell! I am so excited! Severus is a good man. He needs hugs! Like Lucius!
Shetan - The end of this part is here!
LadyVoldemort87 - I thought you had abandoned me. I was DISTRAUGHT! I'm never going to be same. Scarred for life. After this chapter, you may feel pain. I have decided to formally name myself Bellatrix! You may call me Bella.
Draco-bot? I could dig that! Do I get to meet Draco's daddy? I like his daddy. Lucius is HOT! So is Draco though.
AlyBalyBonTaly - Well, emotional attachment is key to a good relationship. Read on and see what happens. Enjoy the note at the end. I had to make Lucius act the part of a gentleman to a woman that he was considering to be his bride. I did not feel after he began to see her as strongly as that, that it would have been right for him to always be busy trying to seduce her or succeeding.
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This would be the final chapter of this portion of story. I shall be out with the sequel, with any luck, within the next week. I believe that I will write the sequels as either/or. There are two ideas! I will be doing both...you'll have to tell me which is better or if both are good. I've never done something like this before...so patience will need to be a virtue.
*psychotic Bellatrix-just-killed-Sirius-Black cackling* Bella is my HERO!
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Lucius stalked toward her.
“You just left me,” he said in a low tone. “Never let me explain. You lied to me! Always wanting to believe the worst of me, you were. Didn’t say in plain words who and what you were. Just yelled them at me. Lied to me until the end.”
“Mr. Malfoy, I’m—”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Lucius mimicked, looking down his nose at her. “Did you think I didn’t know you when I first saw you in Flourish and Blotts? I knew. Did you think that at the World Cup I didn’t recognize you more than ever for being who you were? The Department of Mysteries? My own house? I knew every time.”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Hermione tried again, staring up into his cool calculating eyes.
“I,” Lucius began, “owe,” he pressed his wand to her throat, “you.”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Hermione whispered as she was backed into the wall.
“You could have had everything,” Lucius whispered. “A grand home, all the pretty things and expensive books you could dream of would be yours. You would have had me.”
“M—”
“That is getting quite old,” Lucius said, pressing his body tightly against hers. “Maybe it would be a fitting punishment if I were to ignore you and not speak to you for twenty-six years.”
“Lu—”
“Enough,” Lucius said, sliding a vial containing smoky, silvery liquid into her hand. He moved his lips close to hers. “No matter what happens, Hermione, you will be mine.”
Hermione felt his hot breath, and she tilted her head up. She stared at his lips. Would he kiss her?
Lucius bent his head and pressed his forehead to Hermione's for a moment as he closed his eyes.
“Harry will win the war. He will defeat Voldemort.”
“No matter what happens, Hermione,” Lucius said, looking down his nose at her and scowling.
“I’m going to marry Ron,” Hermione said, staring up at the billowing figure.
Lucius smirked at her.
“I think not.”
“I’m not a possession,” Hermione said.
“Doesn’t mean that you won’t be mine,” Lucius said as he left the Moaning Myrtle’s bathroom to return to the battle.
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Thus ends PART I! *cackles*
This is Schadenfreude at its finest. I feel it anyway! It's hard work being this way. I shall alleviate some of my sense of VICTORY by informing you that I fully intend to present the sequels within a week. I intend to try updating them at roughly the same time of day.
No promises with the nerve problem for getting anything to you within the week and moreover I am still in the planning stages for these stories. One will be a bit lighter and one will be more dark. That is my intention at any rate. Plus, I have my story for school that I have to be working on and thoughts of that are enough to consume a great deal of my time. I believe that it needs some major work done to it.
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Mehuh - I hope that you do refind it, it is now complete. I could tell that you liked it.
andarte - They're good company. The finale! BOOMSY! YAY! *dances around*
Jaime - Poor Lucius.
meankitty69 - *psychotic Bellatrix-just-killed-Sirius-Black cackling*
Voracious Reader - Could Lucius be naked while he gives me a backrub? That would be HOT! Could I sit on his lap? That would be comfort enough for me. Sitting on Lucius' lap. *sighs*
Apple - Don't I always?
Citten - Mel Brooks is great. I love Robin Hood Men in Tights and Spaceballs and Young Frankenstein! I must have missed the vampire bug that is the popular thing these days...I only really like Van Helsing as far as Vampires go. I like them just fine, but I can't get into lots of Vampire books. Anne Rice's work is kind of irritating to me. I do not care for a work to particularly address me as the reader. Poe is one of the few exceptions to that rule ("The Tell Tale Heart" is BRILLIANT! You can read it online if you haven't read it). Poe is an exception to almost every rule I have though. He is too amazing...Last (and perhaps the only) good American poet. Just read on.
Lyssander - Indeed. And perhaps getting a bit scarier.
Utopia - Well, the next chapter should prove interesting, I am hoping. It is the last for this part. I have less of an idea for the sequel(s) than I did for this. That should be fun to write. It will at the very least surprise me as much as you. Inadvertantly, you have helped me in the idea for one of the versions. I'm excited for them! SQUEE! I am also excited for your Lucius/Hermione. SQUEE! It will be AWESOME! I can tell! I am so excited! Severus is a good man. He needs hugs! Like Lucius!
Shetan - The end of this part is here!
LadyVoldemort87 - I thought you had abandoned me. I was DISTRAUGHT! I'm never going to be same. Scarred for life. After this chapter, you may feel pain. I have decided to formally name myself Bellatrix! You may call me Bella.
Draco-bot? I could dig that! Do I get to meet Draco's daddy? I like his daddy. Lucius is HOT! So is Draco though.
AlyBalyBonTaly - Well, emotional attachment is key to a good relationship. Read on and see what happens. Enjoy the note at the end. I had to make Lucius act the part of a gentleman to a woman that he was considering to be his bride. I did not feel after he began to see her as strongly as that, that it would have been right for him to always be busy trying to seduce her or succeeding.
*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*
This would be the final chapter of this portion of story. I shall be out with the sequel, with any luck, within the next week. I believe that I will write the sequels as either/or. There are two ideas! I will be doing both...you'll have to tell me which is better or if both are good. I've never done something like this before...so patience will need to be a virtue.
*psychotic Bellatrix-just-killed-Sirius-Black cackling* Bella is my HERO!
*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*
Lucius stalked toward her.
“You just left me,” he said in a low tone. “Never let me explain. You lied to me! Always wanting to believe the worst of me, you were. Didn’t say in plain words who and what you were. Just yelled them at me. Lied to me until the end.”
“Mr. Malfoy, I’m—”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Lucius mimicked, looking down his nose at her. “Did you think I didn’t know you when I first saw you in Flourish and Blotts? I knew. Did you think that at the World Cup I didn’t recognize you more than ever for being who you were? The Department of Mysteries? My own house? I knew every time.”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Hermione tried again, staring up into his cool calculating eyes.
“I,” Lucius began, “owe,” he pressed his wand to her throat, “you.”
“Mr. Malfoy,” Hermione whispered as she was backed into the wall.
“You could have had everything,” Lucius whispered. “A grand home, all the pretty things and expensive books you could dream of would be yours. You would have had me.”
“M—”
“That is getting quite old,” Lucius said, pressing his body tightly against hers. “Maybe it would be a fitting punishment if I were to ignore you and not speak to you for twenty-six years.”
“Lu—”
“Enough,” Lucius said, sliding a vial containing smoky, silvery liquid into her hand. He moved his lips close to hers. “No matter what happens, Hermione, you will be mine.”
Hermione felt his hot breath, and she tilted her head up. She stared at his lips. Would he kiss her?
Lucius bent his head and pressed his forehead to Hermione's for a moment as he closed his eyes.
“Harry will win the war. He will defeat Voldemort.”
“No matter what happens, Hermione,” Lucius said, looking down his nose at her and scowling.
“I’m going to marry Ron,” Hermione said, staring up at the billowing figure.
Lucius smirked at her.
“I think not.”
“I’m not a possession,” Hermione said.
“Doesn’t mean that you won’t be mine,” Lucius said as he left the Moaning Myrtle’s bathroom to return to the battle.
*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*~-*-~*
Thus ends PART I! *cackles*
This is Schadenfreude at its finest. I feel it anyway! It's hard work being this way. I shall alleviate some of my sense of VICTORY by informing you that I fully intend to present the sequels within a week. I intend to try updating them at roughly the same time of day.
No promises with the nerve problem for getting anything to you within the week and moreover I am still in the planning stages for these stories. One will be a bit lighter and one will be more dark. That is my intention at any rate. Plus, I have my story for school that I have to be working on and thoughts of that are enough to consume a great deal of my time. I believe that it needs some major work done to it.
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