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for A Muddy Secret

by GammaOrionis

schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I love it. Very nicely done.

just read chapter 8 and saw that you modeled Abraxas Malfoy on your own father. I am so sorry about how you have been treated as a child. I was crying when reading Lucius' experiences, knowing that they are not only a plot in your story, but your own personal history. My tears were really for you.

And no need for apologizing about the angst in your story: it has to be in there because Lucius' history has a lot of angst in it. After all, you don't become Voldemort's right hand man out of nothing.

Great job. Very intriguing story. Will probably continue reading tonight until I am too tired. Thank you for this lovely work.
schedule September 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story was simply brilliant.
person the rose and the dagger
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, just finished reading your story adn i don't how long ago you posted it - brill by the way.
i just want to say i was reading you rcomments and got a bit worried. over 10/12 yrs - bit more, my father had a pinched nerve in his elbow and had to have it operated it, 5 yrs later the same on the other hand, it started out with pins and needle, numbing and muscle loss, his muscles in his hands adn legs are best word is wasted, he has trouble controling them at times - chocking at night, unable to walk properly, unable to get a firm grip, he now has to drive an automatic.
he gets yearly tests and for a while the doctors thought he had motor neuron disease the only reason they say it's not is that he would be dead a few years ago, but he does a muscle/neuron condition.
please please watch yourself and if you go to the doctors again mention this as a collegue of mine husband had similar symptons and he does have motor neuron disease - this has a life expectancy of av 5 yrs from diahnosis.
please take care of yourself x x x x
person Yes Mistress
schedule April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No!!!!!!!Nonononono need more story!! eep. I feel so conflicted.Please tell me there's a sequel.
schedule March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMN IT!!!!!!!!!! YOU CANT DO THAT! JUST UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule December 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story, although leaving it on such a cliffhanger isn't nice! Good work - now I have to read everything else!

person Anastata
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How could you! you.. you.. just ended it like that. =[
i feel like i'm about to cry..
person Anon
schedule November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Phiana
schedule October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You cant just leave it there, thats soooooo mean! Love his story, well written and very VERY GOOD!!! Keep it up and please post again soon!
person the_slytherin_princess
schedule October 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a fantastic story! I loved it! I can not wait for the sequal, please don't take too long getting it posted! :)