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for What are big brothers for

by avril

person Anon
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update this story very soon :}
person anonymous
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as possible!! You have me on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next! Thanks
person Talene
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re welcome! I love this story......nothing like the forbidden to tantilize! Lucius is also fobidden. Is he not? Why not a three way with LM, BW, and Ginny? First either Bill and ginny or Bill and Lucius and then the other. Later....all three. What think you? None fall faster or harder than those whose morals were the hst ist in the first place. Ah...but the descent! If you can call it that. Or is it the removal of shackles? Only the one in question canwer wer that. In my case....my shackles were removed......more silky chains that were more desirable waited and you can choose to willingly don them or remain free. Your mind always has the choice. But I ramble.....sorry. Excellent story! Please continue to write! I wait for further chapters with rapt wonder and bated breath!
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more...More...MORE! This story is soooo great! hehe Please continue!!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please update as soon as you can!!
person M
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! Lucius, didn\'t expect to see him.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok like keep going gf I love it so far
person Saria
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will there be some nice, wonderful sex? I usually dun read het, so consider yourself lucky!
person higapox
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty gud. i live in the uk an jus incase u were wonderin i understood it all. it was rly gud u just need to continue it.
luv hx
person Renee
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like your story and I want more Chapters... OMG! I sound like a little spoiled brat! Please add more chappies! these two, as loco as it seems, sound good together! I\'m addicted!