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for What are big brothers for

by avril

person Anon
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think Lucius should have a bigger part. He fits as the behind the scenes guy. I think there should be more Bill and Ginny. Now that he\'s had her, he should crave her more. Since Ginny has lost her virginity, she should feel that it\'s easier and more pleasurable to have sex now. Because she didn\'t know it was Bill that took her virginity and she fantasizes about him, maybe she could consciencely or uncosciencely seduce him.
person Lispy
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I wanna see Ginny go to Bill for help. And they like talk shit though. but keep it up it\'s awesome
person anonymous
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, please continue with this story. Definitely continue the Bill/Ginny plot.
person Laerai
schedule October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You had a good thing going. Continue hehe!
person anonymous
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter!! Please update as soon as you can!!
person AureliaFlint
schedule September 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just found this fic and I must say it is quite good. Your Bill is very attractive and I have a soft spot for Lucius. Can\'t wait to read more.
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Glad to help. Feel free to ask questions.....you have my addy. You can also reach me at Talene_1967@hotmail.com It is a wonderful story and I certainly understand about giving into Lucius. I would.....eventually. I\'d make him work for it though. I know I will be caught and by my choice but.....I love the hunt! Don\'t you?
person MoD
schedule September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ohh, Lucuis can do whatever he wants!
person Mary
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i would keep with bill and ginny story line that is what you stated off with.
person LadyTess
schedule September 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do continue on with the Ginny/Bill story line. I think you are doing a great job. Very interesting. As far a Lucius goes who in there right mind could resist him? I\'d love to read about him and Bill or all three of them together. Whatever you decide will be great!