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for What are big brothers for

by avril

person Aideen
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mar: this chapy made me wanna cry but you did a wonderful job on it, i cant wait to read more.....by the way i have a new sn on here xtremereddragon and sissy (keno) has a new one as well silverwolf so thet tit time i review will probaby be from my new name :)
person Leah
schedule December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, err... nicely written, but don\'t think i can take weasleycest....
person Nurisa
schedule November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello, hola que tal? No way! the Spanish is easier than the English1 but don
person Nurisa
schedule November 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah another good one but Malfoy??? no way!! better Bill and Ginny...and Good luck with your Spanish it
person Aideen
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keno:the old pervert needs to die, seriously

Mar: no kidding, and Bill and Ginny cant break up *cries* its to cute in this story
person observer
schedule November 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like the bathroom scene in this chapter it was very loving. I hated the next scene with Lucius. Can\'t wait until he gets is comeuppance. Hope to read the next chapter soon. I feel sorry for Bill and Ginny.
person SkyDunsmore
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. You need a beta and have a few typos but man, was that HOT. On to chapter two!
schedule November 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Beautiful!! More please??
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is hot hot hot i am so glad my husband was on hand after reading chapter 9. keep up the great work.
person Gatsu87645
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, all except Lucious. Do something; kill him off, anything, just get rid of him.