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for What are big brothers for

by avril

person luvhp
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Uhm , well, WOW!
What started off as a nice dirty Weasley story turned into something much more evil and holy hell, what a ride!
I have to say I enjoyed this, sick and twisted as it was, but Hey, I read because I know it's fiction people! lol.
person Horney Hermione
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! She\'s obviously been gagging for it from her big brother for years. It\'s such a pity he didn\'t take her years before.
schedule December 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a veryyyyyyyyyyyyy Good story!!
I truly luved it...At first i wasnt feeling the whole incest thing..*Gross*..But after a few chapters it grew on me and I saw it diffrent...Great work!!!
person Leogal
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Avril...your story so far is the best i read in all of the site.*Please* *PLEASE*
Write More Stories like this!!!
My intrest in Erotic Stories are fading and this story just saved it!!
person Nurisa
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hello Avril! HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO! (I luky because I live in Spain? yeah...but its sld hld here!)Well I don
person deblovesdragon
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What a dark ending! I am not really surprised that you went that way. Not too many happy endings with incest stories.
I knew that Bill would take the blame for Ginny. I was a little surprised that Ginny went insane. Thought that she was stronger than that.
Bill\'s rape was quite brutal. Lucius desd mod more suffering in my opinion. Until the last chapter he was deliciously wicked and not downright evil.
In the end he was evil incarnate.
I wonder if Lucius was the cause of their downfall or if they would have been destroyed without his \"interference\". Hum.
Great fic either way. They can\'t all have a happy ending...
person ScreaminChild
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i liked ur whole story but the way u ended it u made it sound like there is going to be a sequal or not it would be really kool if u did. the ending u had i say leave it the way it is. idk y i just like it.
person Excel
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story was amazing. Twisted, intruiging and awesome. Although the ending was dark, I kindassuassumed it would end in a dark way. I mean, how could it not? A brother and sister can\'t beers ers in normally society and their family sure as hell wouldn\'t go for it. If you do write more, I hope you Gin Ginny\'s view. Hopefully a sane view as she recovers from what happened. Fab story. ^_^
person Nurisa
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Avril, how wonderful chapter! lucius is a bad man! how he dare...well write soon! and HAPPY X-MAS!!!!!!!!! I Hope that Santa, Brings you all what you want for be a good writer. Kss
person anonymous
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please you i can not wait to find out what happens next!! please update as soon as you can!!!