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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this story at fanfiction.net lol....but i havent read chapter 3 and 4. so i will just read them here. anywho...good story....i like it. ppl like the idea of Mr Malfoy making Snape rape Hermione. hmmm and then she has a baby. its normally a girl. but in this case its a boy....i think it is normally a girl cuz Snape is older. anywho UPDATE soon. i will check this story out every other day. :o)
~PinkChubbyMonkey
PS keep up the good work (sorry I didn\'t review the other chapters, I am in a hurry to read cuz i got 2 B offlinein like 3 mins. lol. but if you remind me i will go back an review)
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~PinkChubbyMonkey
PS keep up the good work (sorry I didn\'t review the other chapters, I am in a hurry to read cuz i got 2 B offlinein like 3 mins. lol. but if you remind me i will go back an review)
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It will be very interesting to see how this story developes and like you said there is nothing new under the son, it is how each person interprets it. There were some very emotional scenes in this chapter and I am looking forward to the next one.
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Merry Met! Tis a lovely story thus so far. I hope that you intend to finish it. I am eager to hear......Shade and Sweet Water. Blessed Be.
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adored your first chapter. Very innovative. The story is sweet. Please update soon.
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh can u please continue? It\'s really good!
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was full of tension,I really felt the force of humiliation,fear and doubt which are the very part of Hermiona`s mind yet she had done the only right decision she should do-stay with Snape he mhe most safe place in wizards world.I`m curious what way would develope their relationship-compulsory parenthood could be the beginning of something more,but I think te intimacy would be very difficult for Hermione to achieve.Waiting for next installment wish you to update soon,with hope you still want to write continuation.
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story! I\'m glad Hermione gave Severus a bit of a hard time (and hope she gives him many more \"evil grin\"). Keep up goo good work!
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A resounding cheer went up when I saw you had updated both stories. This one is developing beautifully. I\'ve said it before, but I\'ll say it again,;What a man Snape is in this one, I just adore him*SIGHS HAPPILY* I\'m glad you seem to have sorted out your computer problems and hope to see another update soon:C)
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t make me fly out and beat you! I was reading and reading and got to the fifth chapter and you just stop? That\'s not fair!!! Being the proofreading machine I am, I did spot some errors, but nothing was flawed about your presentation of the story. This is shaping up to be one of your best. I enjoy it and thank you for allowing us to partake of your creativity.
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August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool story write more soon. I like Hermione being so lost ..