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person Jade
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It would be too funny if Neville killed Malofy. I can\'t wait to see Draco\'s reaction to this and the whole Slytherin house. OH, the humor and pain! LOL go for it.
person Corazon
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Harry\'s reaction was very
believable. I can\'t wait to read what Ron
has to say, but for now I found it humourous
yet touching that Severus was asking for
help.

Hugs,
Corazon
person Fervesco
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so sweet and heartwarming, yet heartbreaking all at the sametime! Wonderful that you\'ve updated and I very much hope to see even more soon! Can\'t wait to see what Ron will say...
person eltaldtaldeity
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry. The whole baby part way to familiar, yeah id say you got it right. Please post soon.
person Sharon
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! Please update soon!
person Laerai
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you updated. This is a great story... And agh, leaving before the explanation to Harry! That tug at me a little, it did. You write well, and the plot is good too. I\'m anxious to see how it\'ll all turn out! Keep writing! ^_^

Laerai
person PinkChubbyMonkey
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay....everyone likes my name...lol...well almost...i have gotten some reviews and emails that say my name is perverted but i dont see it....but whatever ppl have gutter minds. well good chapter. hurry up with more. i car hardly wait to see more. remember make harry angry...just like in book 5, lmao!
person Estrilda
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow - your story is just great - well written - well plotted. I don\'t know how hard it i fix fix typos, but you need a few more o\'s when you use \"too\" in the paragraph above the tricky situation sentence. Please update soon. I\'m so hooked.
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh How sweet! Severus is just a cuddly teddy when confronted with a newborn isn\'t he? *grins* I hope to see an update soon and I absolutely love where this story is heading =)

KE
person Seraphina
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that\'s what I call a CLIFFHANGER! How will Harry react to the news? I can\'t wait to find out. Poor Hermione though, she really doesn\'t know if she can truly trust Snape or not, and yet he\'s trying so hard, it\'s soo difficult for them both. I\'m really looking forward to watching how you manage to get these two tortured souls over all the hurdles they will inevitably face. Thanks for the update.