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person aprilgrey
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Many thanks for another wonderful chapter. I am eagerly awaiting the next update!
person Mogli the Witch
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Oh Merlin...

I can truly say that I\'ve reands nds nds of - very hard, and very dark - fanfic\'s by now. Trust me, the really hard stuff...

But somehow this story - even if it isn\'t that descriptive - really touches me.

You are really an artist with words.

What I mean, is, that it is easy to shock, to terrify someone with detailed descriptions of horrible events, of torture and rape, but it is an entirely different skill needed to write something like that without those descriptions.

Only the psyche of the persons involved, only atmosphere, thoughts, feelings...

That\'s what I like, and I adore everyone who manages to write something like this.

Please, go on writing like this!

Besos y abrazos

Mogli the Witch
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting to see Harry and Severus.....talking.

interesting, indeed.....

and as for Ron. i can well imagine his reaction! should prove near hysterical....

~blessings~
ldf
person michelline
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been enjoying this story and finally at chapter 8, I\'m feeling guilty enough to review. I apologize!! I do like your idea. Hermione\'s parents are horrible! I can\'t imagine ever doing that to my children. That actually did happen to my mother though. Pregnant at 14 and then kicked out of the house. Horrible people. Anyway, your story is well done so far. I\'m really looking forward to chapter 9. Although I would like to vote for a happy ending?? Please???
person michelline
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been enjoying this story and finally at chapter 8, I\'m feeling guilty enough to review. I apologize!! I do like your idea. Hermione\'s parents are horrible! I can\'t imagine ever doing that to my children. That actually did happen to my mother though. Pregnant at 14 and then kicked out of the house. Horrible people. Anyway, your story is well done so far. I\'m really looking forward to chapter 9. Although I would like to vote for a happy ending?? Please???
person michelline
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been enjoying this story and finally at chapter 8, I\'m feeling guilty enough to review. I apologize!! I do like your idea. Hermione\'s parents are horrible! I can\'t imagine ever doing that to my children. That actually did happen to my mother though. Pregnant at 14 and then kicked out of the house. Horrible people. Anyway, your story is well done so far. I\'m really looking forward to chapter 9. Although I would like to vote for a happy ending?? Please???
person Pixi
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Job. The more I see the more I like. Can\'t wait to see what you do next. I hope you don\'t throw in a happy ever after / omg I am so in love quickly if you do at all, I like watching characters grow. Its so much more fun than to have them fall in love in two pages and marry after four.

Keep it up
person Corazon
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The conversation between Harry and
Severus was well needed. Without
saying much and say a lot at the same
time, they have come to an agreement.

I loved the line, \"Follow her of course.\"
It was perfect.

Hugs,
Corazon
person Kiristeen
schedule September 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful handling of the Hermione - Harry conversation. Well done! Got a big giggle out of the \"Hermione, help.\" ::smirk:: I can\'t wait for more.


Kiri
person Catherine
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Woah...this is one of the best stories i have read in ages. I commend you, i really do. You have portrayed Hermione very well, and no matter how OOC people may think Severus is you have shown a side of him that i love. It is a wonderful story and i cant wait for the next installment. I am going to go see if i can read ne of ur other stories now:P