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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok if I admit that you are the queen of cliffhangers will you stop with them? I am willing to bet that you will not. I check two or three times a day looking for an update and when it is there, I am left with yet another cliff. This is a wonderfull story and you are doing a good job of telling it. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. I hope it is soon. Keep up the good work.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was simply wonderful, painful, but compelling, and the revelation at the end was breathtaking. I just love how you are developing telatelationship in this story and I can\'t wait to see what you reveal to us next.
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! Please update soon! So Hermione had his memories in her mind? Severus loes her? Please tell me that Lucious gets what he deserves! That...that...OH! He better get what he deserves! Update and soon!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So finally we know it ! Oh, and that\'s really a wunderful chapter, marvellous ideas. Where did you get the inspiration, who is your muse? Please more !!!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was so very well written! I wanted to cry at the end! Now I understand why she took his memory away! She saw him cry and he admitted he loved her! Oh it was so sad and horrible! I look forward to the next chapter as always!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I can\'t wait till you update once more. Now that Sev knows exactly what happened what is gonna happen now? I am waiting with bated breath. BTW I updated my stories today! =) Tell me what you think..
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh ooh ooooooooohhhhhhhhh! SO DAMN GOOD! Well worth the wait... But hang on what was that at the end... Another bloody cliffhanger URGH!!! God\'s I think you would be one scarry tease in real life. (non-sexual implications---unless you want it to be otherwise). Evil Lucius is so much fun when he is trying to fuck with Sev--- I say tring because I am positive *holds dagger at your neck* Sev will come up with some sort of---revenge? (Not that I am trying to intimidate you or anything).*evil grin*
I leave you craving more, and in the words of an immortal \'be obscene\'
Shemxxx
I leave you craving more, and in the words of an immortal \'be obscene\'
Shemxxx
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two chapters at once, what a treat! Loved the mental dialogue Severus had with himself, wonderfully original! Keep up the good work!
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I am almost speechless. Surely, it was not what I was expecting. The entire chapter is, of course, painful; but, the revelation at the end. Gods, what horrors for Sev. Please continue soon. **Applauds Wildly***
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October 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus.....The story is at once tender and heart wrenching. I am captivated, dear lady and I eagerly look forward to more. I also wished I moved as quickly. :) I am waiting for my beta to tell me something about that last chapter I just sent her. hehe