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That was brilliant. I have loved every step of this journey, and I can\'t wait for more! Your words flow almost seamlessly. Poor Severus!! I agree with Hermione on this one, but I understand her need to take a step back. *sigh*. MORE PLEASE!!

Please please hurry with the next chapter.....I would like it alot if he didn\'t have to tell her that he raped her with out influence. But of course its your writing, and I think its great! Can\'t wait to read the next part.

poor severus, hmm raping the women he loved- what a twist i didn\'t expect him to have such strong feelings for her before the rape, very interesting. at least that explains his immediate daddy!snape acceptence. i was suprised he wasn\'t snarky at all about the baby. the rape seems a very large obstacle for them to get around, expessially if what lucius said was true about snape acting on his own. can\'t wait to see!

I love the story are you writing another chapter. I hope you are because I would love to find out what happens.

i read the newest post last night, but i was so bloody brain dead when i did so, i forgot to leave a note and didn\'t realized it until i was nearly asleep. so here goes.....

oh, you are SO cruel! first, for the cliffie...... evil, yet again. second, for how horrid the Master was treated.
please allow him to properly thrash malfoy! better yet, allow me! PLEASE?

ok, i\'m better now.... no really, i am....

at any rate, i think it was well written. i can only hope that the two of them can forgive themselves for what has happened, as it\'s still not entirely all within their control.
heat of the moment and all..... no, i will not blame the Master for the entire mess.....

love you, darling!

~huhs~

~blessings~
ldf

Woah that was sooo good. Loved it honey. Keep going u must soon!!!! I cant wait to see Sev\'s reaction...hes soo yummy:P Ne way keep going my love...i love your story...

Cat

Such a well-planned story! I can\'t wait for more.

Okay, I have a beef with the terminology you\'re using in this story. You forgot to convert all the \"Mommy\"\'s to \"Mummy\"s. People in England do not SAY \"Mommy\". Its always \"Mummy\" or \"Mum\". CAn you please ammend this? Its rather annoying because I\'m sure that you know this information but I can\'t figure out why you didn\'t apply it to the story. The story\'s great otherwise, don\'t get me wrong, but can you please fix this?

Now, that was evil....

I feel so bad for Snape!

Now, please god, More. I am such an addict now. You have me checking back constantly to see if you\'ve written more.

I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Please be kind and update soon!

I have to say that you got me to register here just so I could give you a fully signed review. This chapter was brilliant. I had thought that it was just going to be another \'standard issue\' compelled rape scene-we get so many of them in the fandom-but you brought something original and heartbreaking to it. I\'ve already read this chapter twice, and I am looking forward impatiently to the next installment.