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I love it honey. Sorry I wasn\'t around to proof, it was great without me. I promise to read any future additions and will continue to work on my own stories. Love it baby!

I was uncertain about this fiction when I started reading it, as it seemed a little too similar to others that I have read, like the Buried Life. But you have put an interesting and different spin on this, and perhaps in Hermione\'s reaction in this case a more likely response than other fictions. I hardly think that she would hop into bed with her rapist straightaway, be he ever so blameless. And it seems just like Lucius to play that kind of mind game, and a very interesting twist in the plot. I didnt see how you were going to get the story back on track after the previous chapter, but this works very well.

I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

Well, you certainly must have relished the agony everyone went through waiting for that chapter...It was well worth the wait though...Surprised though equally please with Sev\'s candid retelling/confession...personally I don\'t believe in all this OOC bullshit when exploring Sev\'s personal life and thoughts..we only really know what JK tells us...the rest is our own interpretation...have taken the liberty of contacting her and demanding that not only does she tell us of his more *cough* personal attributes *cough*, and am currently gathering signitures and ideas from others to back up my application...Have great faith that I will be able to convince her of the \"error\" of her ways for not exploring this earlier...I am rambling...I know..

Poor little Sevvie, Red make it Ok...Mione will come back to him....or I shall sic Gollum on evil evil author....

Not that that is supposed to intimidate you or anything...*big cheesy grin*

Wanting more, sooner...(shall go back to main page now in deluded belief next chapter will be there already)

Shem xxx

OMG a wonderful heart wrenching chapter! I just don\'t have the words top say how wonderful this chapter was.

Great keep it up! I really like how you thank every one its so sweet! Your writing is lovely, it flows very well which is more than I can say for so many other stories of this nature. Can\'t wait to see the next chapter

This story is FANTASTIC!!! I am so glad that you have updated, this chapter was great, as is the whole story!!! I look forward to seeing what the future chapters hold in store for these 2!!! Deb >^..^<

Oh bless their hearts! So much pain and fear and just all kinds of angsty feelings... On the upside she doesn\'t blame him and I have to agree w/ her if he wasn\'t under the curse then he would have been able to think clearer and he wouldn\'t have raped her. He loves her too much and wanted to protect her. His heart wouldn\'t have allowed it. Lucius is a masterful liar and torturer. It makes great sence that he would want to punish Severus for getting in his way of taking Hermione for himself. I hope that they are able to find the love and comfort they need in each other. Time and patience I guess... I look forward to the next chapter. This is a wonderful fic that has me addicted to it!

*blushing and rubbing back of neck after reading the responce to the review* you know, i might just get a little too excited with fanfiction. but i cant help it if it pulls me that way.
anyway...you knows chs chapter was kinda creepy...i dont quite know my opinions on the matter anymore...im just trying to sort my own feelngs on the matter...
well, please do write more soon. thanks.

Thanks again for another wonderful chapter!

I have been following this story for quite some time, checking back to see if there are more chapters up.....it has been frustrating....because already in just a few short chapters I like it so well!! So, I am bouncing up and down waiting for more, more, more!!

Tammy