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my idea of revenge is rather odd. being happy is the best revenge. how about a nice big wedding with lucius as the best man. and thanking him for bringing them together. thus making this day the happiest of their lives. make sure there is a special toast to him acknowledging this fact. minus the little details so everyone will know. the Maid of honor how about Ginny

I already told you what I think. This story rules and I\'ll cry if you take it down. If you need anymore revenge ideas (evil, quasi-evil, funny, etc.) just remember that I AM THE MASTER OF DARKNESS... wow, even I didn\'t believe that one.


Still Ill,
Semidazed

Revenge? Well, how about making Lucius unable to, um, perform in a situation where he must \"prove himself\" to a partner? I imagine this is a nightmarish situation to any man. Add to that if Lucius actually has to come to Severus and BEG for a potion that would cure him... Either because the cure is so complex that there are few who can make it, or else, because if he would want to buy it from somebody, that somebody would automatically realize what poor Lucius\' affliction and and a well known man like him wouldn\'t want this, would he. Heh. I\'m not entirely sure how to add Hermione, but her and Sev\'s revenge can be tied somehow.

-Red

Another fine chapter, I\'m really glad Hermione is being soo understanding in this terrible situation. Sorry to hear your muse has gone AWOL, not that I can believe it for a moment! Hope Frank returns to you soon and you are happily reunited.

Revenge on Lucius...hmmm, let\'s see now...How about a rather nasty permanent impotence potion or hex, I can\'t see Malfoy being too thrilled at losing the use of the old wand!!!! Payback for Hermione indeed to know that he could never do to another woman what he planned to do to her?! Petty and juvenille perhaps, but it wouldn\'t half be satisfying!!!!!

Thanks for writing and I really do hope things begin to look up for you muse-wise soon.

I dont have an idea, but I\"ll get my fan girl Pom pom\'s out and do the muse cheer to get your muse back.

the story is great, the last chapter was very touching and well written.

The rape scene was difficult for me to read but was well written.This chapter was also well done.Cheers to Hermi for her understanding tos Ses Sev. Not many would see past the pain and realise that Sev wouldn\'t have hurt her.Lucius needs to die a most painful death!! Where\'s Fluffy when you need him?

Way ouch! That would *certainly* be cause for a break down. Excellent job here.


kiri

What a wonderfully well written, original fic. Angst, angst and more angst. I love it!

Oh thank you for that little bit of closure! Another cliffhanger would have killed me, LOL.

very nice, hon.

~blessings~
ldf