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Chapter Twelve: Show me the way of my heart
thinthink you did a wonderful job of letting this chapter be Hermione\'s lead in to loving Severus!!! It was left open enough to give her some more time to think & it also left me believing that , with all her brains, she was not rushing into anything too quickly. FABULOUS & will be keeping an eye out for lucky chapter 13!!! Deb >^..^<

busy, are we?

good, let\'s keep the chappies coming.

don\'t make me pull royal rank on you! ;p

~blessings~
ldf

I aam, as ever, a faithful reader of yours my dear.Your story is wonderful and I am a survivor or rape myself. Falling into someone\'s arms immediately is not the first thing on your mind....I agree.Please continue to update! I love it!!

This story is turning out wonderfully! I have to say that I love the way you have managed to work things out to this point. I read your plea for ideas and I will be honest w/ you. I think you should not touch the revenge angleet tet things be as they are. If you see the need to play out justice I say have Sev and Mione present at the fall of Voldemort and have Lucius attack Hermione and Severus beat him to a bloody pulp and then have Hermione or maybe even an abused Draco give him Avada Kedavera. Just my humble opinion, but I think this story should focus more on their newly formed relationship, coping w/ a baby, uncharted feelings, and the like. You seem to excel at that type of wng fng from what I have read so far. I think you will make this a wonderful read no matter which route you take!

Hugs,
Ness

P.S. Somehow the last chapter posted 3 times! 0__0 Ooops!

I love this story!!! PLEASE keep writing! I am resisting the urge to call it \"snape-a-riffic,\" but only because that word is deeply spiritual to me!=) Please keep writing!

This fic rocks! I think I ahve fallen in love with HG/SS! I swear! I never bothered to read HP fics before these! I love it! I love Severus!

Please hurry and update!!!!

Rose

Hmmmm........ what to do to Lucius. I have been thinking about this, but no concrete thoughts yet. Though, I don\'tnk Snk Severus would be happy with anything short of Lucius\' death. So...... how to kill him ? Severus can\'t do it, because he would end up in Azkaban. But if Severus could..(I can\'t remember if you have Voldemort dead or alive) convince Voldemort, or better just start the rumor amongst the Death Eaters, that Lucius had betrayed them, Severus wouldn\'t have orryorry about killing him. Maybe Lucius could even go to Severus pleading for help only to be turned over to the Death Eaters. \'Revenge is a dish best served cold\', Lucius does not know Severus has his memory back. That could help plan his downfall.

Hope this gives you something to ponder. If I come up with something more solid, I\'ll get back to you.

Glinda

I think that a prophecy should be revealed around Sev and Hermione\'s baby\'s birth and a think the prophecy should include the destruction of the instigator of the child\'s birth (I am brainstorming this so work with me)t sht should practically parallal the Harry/ Voldermort relationship. Additionally, I can see a lot of material with Sev\'s paternal ineptness. I think that he will improve with time. Hermione\'s healing presents a wonderful plot as does her blossoming relationship with Sev. Just thoughts....Good luck!

Woah...that was too good...man it was great...i hope ur Muse comes back soon *Calls Muse*...

Catherine

This story is absolutely Delicious!!!
Can\'t wai see see what will happen next!!!!!!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase update soon!!!!