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person ldf
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, what a completely Ron like reaction. loved it~

and you thought you could sneak this in on me, did you?
well, your plan didn\'t succeed.

suffice it to say i liked the chappie. and i\'ll have a new one for
Leather up as soon as i can plot out what will happen.
besides the smut, of course! ;p

loved it, darling.....

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic Red... I really don\'t have annstrnstructive imput for you. Just wanted to give my support. Write more soon, if possible.
person Rilla
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So sweet. I needed to read something with warm fuzzies today where Sev wasn\'t too far out of character. You\'ve managed to not turn him into mush in the father role which is a very difficult thing to do. :)
person Bindi
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The story just keeps getting better and better.Keep up the great work!
person jenbachand
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t reviewed in a while and I just wanted to say these last few chapters have been great. Especially this new one. It\'s so cute and fuzzy. Glad to see they are making a go of it. Looking forward to more. It\'s such a great story. Can\'t wait for school to start.

Jen :)
person Goddess Tori of Azkaban
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HEy great job. PL upd update soon! Loving it lots!!
Tori
person Helena
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! So cute!!!
Our Severus giving to his child a bath!!!! What a sight!!
I\'m loving this story, you\'re doing a terrific work!!!!
person Deb >^..^<
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Daddy Severus bathing his tiny son, the visual is just dar darn sweet!!! I really do like how you are working Hermione into this relationship.... time is their key to make it work. The little things that she oingoing in making them a family seem to be brought on in an all natural & pure way, not sounding or acting like she is forcing herself. Her kissing him on the cheek, watching him sleep with their son, calling him daddy to the baby are all such natural responses & make it seem that she wants the real family thing*
person Silvana
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Wet, shirtless, footfoot Snape. *melts into puddle* Wonderful story so far!
person ldf
schedule November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mmmm.....wet and soaking, shirtless Severus.....

~smacks self in head~ sorry, got distracted there for a moment
can\'t imagine why. ;pany any rate

love the domesticity. honestly

and i promise there will be more. i\'m working on chapter 5
for Leather now...... be on the look out for someone we both know
and love...... ;p

love ya, hun. ~hugs~

~blessings~
ldf