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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story and it\'s wonderful to watch Snape and Hermione growing gradually closer. It\'s lovely to see them working together as a little family, I\'m a sap for all that mushy stuff. I really do hope you come up with some truly evil revenge for Malfoy though! Thanks for the well wishes about the flu, I\'m feeling much better now...and another chapter would help me feel much better still:C)
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Awesome story, and Molly would make the bestest babysitter in the world! Can\'t wait for more!
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November 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well it took alittle time but it nice to see that Severus is becoming quite the better man now that he has Hermione (in a sense). And the things that he\'s doing is so heartfelt. And as for the boys I\'m glad that they are there for Hermione and very supportive. That\'s what fds ads are for! This story is simply wonderful and I hope to read more!
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November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read your response to my last review. I don\'t remember what I wrote, but I certainly hope that I was not critical in any way.
I love your story and I would not blast it in any way.
Wouldn\'t Sebastian still be in danger if the wizarding world thought the baby was Harry\'s? Voldemort might go after him. (Shudder!)
Please don\'t put the baby in danger. Too many moms reading this would be freaking out!
I love your story and I would not blast it in any way.
Wouldn\'t Sebastian still be in danger if the wizarding world thought the baby was Harry\'s? Voldemort might go after him. (Shudder!)
Please don\'t put the baby in danger. Too many moms reading this would be freaking out!
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like how you\'ve gotten Harry to be the \'temporary father\'. And I look forward to the eventual punishment of Lucius Malfoy. Making him suffer is always sort of entertaining when he\'s a real bastard!
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh just caught up with this story. Tis quite lovely and I love all the detail you have put into this and am looking forward to the term starting.
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was another GREAT one!!! It is so nice to see all 3 of them making such an effort for Hermione & her son!!! Gotta be a little sad for Ron, he wants so much to be able to do more, damn that hair;-) I really like the way that you have Hermione opening up with Severus & both of them showing more affection toward each other*
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter. Maybe I\'m wrong, but it seems like there was a bit of a jump in Hermione and Severus reactions to each other. It seemed like one minute she was just starting to consider things and then boom the hand holding and kissing and such. Not that I\'m complaining, it just felt a little rushed.
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ok, that had to be the best bit yet.
Severus making comment about Weasley sperm....
ummm.... i think i just saw a man in red at the door,
looking for fire wood........ odd, that.
loved it, dear heart.
*hugs*
~blessings~
ldf
Severus making comment about Weasley sperm....
ummm.... i think i just saw a man in red at the door,
looking for fire wood........ odd, that.
loved it, dear heart.
*hugs*
~blessings~
ldf
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You\'re welcome and yes, I am very pleased with chapter 18. It\'s a wonderful idea to hide his paternity with Harry. I\'m looking forward to seeing how this plays out.