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person Alanfan
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will be undateing this story soon as I was enjoying it. I can\'t wait to see what you\'ve got planned for them. I know what I hope for??
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
After a long absence from AFF, I come back to this! It\'s absolutely wonderful. So many twists and turns added to the mix. Had a lot of reading to catch up on but it\'s still going beautifully and I\'m glad. One of the few stories I am keeping up with. Keep up the good work and hope to see more soon:D
schedule December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfully creative story! I was reading on ff.net, but I decided to start reading it here instead! I have really enjoying reading this and I am looking forward to your next update!
Tanya~
person Pandora Nervosa
schedule December 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read this fic a while ago and just now remembered I had it bookmarked. I am enjoying it ever so much. I can\'t wait for Severus and Hermione to be together..and for Lucius to get what\'s coming to him. Brilliant work.
person Higapox
schedule December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg! this keeps getting better. sorry i havnt reviewed
fro a while, i hav been buisy. THANK GOD im back or i
would have missed sooooooo much. update soon!!!!
love n hugs higapox xxx
person LilyMalfoy
schedule December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Great chapter. As for the previous one, I fully understand your reasoning... sometimes you just have to make that leap. And sometimes the characters just do it on their own.
person Stratyllis
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Freaky! I love this story. I can\'t wait to see what will happen next. When I Hermione going to fall in love with Severus? Soon I hope.
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so cute! Severus is jealous! I don\'t know why I find his infinately (sp) confident character sexy when he is jealous. GRRRR!

Caskets?!?! Bad omen, BAD! Not so subtle way for Hermione to let her fears out. She must be harboring some DEEP fears.
Oh, thanks for letting me know that Sebastian is going to be safe. I hate worrying about the infant characters in stories. :-)

Keep writing please.
person ldf
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo, snuck it in on me, did you?
shame on you.

hmmm, getting interesting.

*hug
~b
~blessings~
ldf
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule November 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP, that\'s one nasty omen!!! I really like how you are portraying Sev\'s jelousy, I really think it suits him. He wants his family for himself & he is the type of man that would feel extremely possesive. He knows that the plan is what\'s best, but fake marriage or not he is jus wus which shows that his feelings come from his heart!!!

I do agree that Ron would get too caught up in the role of fake father, he would become to attached. I do like the thought that he is so willing to help though!!!

I do so look forward to your next update, I want to see how Hermione reacts to the fake wedding & learn more about the omen!!! Deb >^..^<