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person Alisha
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww...bless your heart, this chapter is so touching, yet sad at the same time. I look forward to seeing how Harry and Hermione adjust to their so called \"marriage\" with each other, and how Severus deals with it also. Love this chappie, can\'t wait till next. :)
person Anon
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18........ I am so glad that you have updated this story!!! I like how you are pulling the plan together, Minerva\'s memories are a nicely added touch!!! I am still very curious about the coffins?!? It was quite a surprise that they found all of her belongings in them!!! I am sure that there is a lot more to the coffins & am sure you will let us know whee tie time is right*
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last review was from me, my right finger got ahead of me & clicked send before I was done;-)
person spaz141
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I saw a for real update I almost burst into tears, thanks. I am intrigued by the fake marriage and how that will work as Hermione is starting to open up to Severus. This story is great.
person nesscafe
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Severus! He loves her so much and now he has to watch her be w/ Harry and he\'s jealous because he wants to be a father to his son and he can\'t. It\'s so unfair! I was hoping that there would be a fireplace in Harry & Hermione\'s room and she and Sebastian could floo in at night when the coast was clear and at least sleep in Snape\'s quarters. Giving him at least a little time to be a father to his son!
person PotionsMistressM
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is quickly becoming one of my faves! It\'s on my recommend list, too. I hope you can update more frequently, but I understand if you cannot. Please, I beg of you, keep this up!
person Tanya
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You\'ve got me totally entranced by this story and totally stumped. How in the world did those two caskets arrive bearing all of Hermione\'s belongings? Weren\'t all of her belongings still with her parents? And if so, who managed to get them to her? Unless there is something we do not know about her parents? Oh, don\'t mind me... it\'s just my *very* early morning dazed mind trying to tie things together... I\'m also very curious about how you are going to manage this \"fake wedding\" and make it seem real to all who do not know the truth. I love how Severus is a totally different man with Hermione, though he is still the sexy bastard we all know and love him to be with everyone else! Great chapter! Please update soon!
Tanya~
person Alisha
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I\'ve been reading it ever since the first few chapters came out. And I found out just recently where that damn review button was! I was looking all over the reviews page for it! Stupid me. Aaaanyway, love how it is proceeding, and Severus is just too cute. Whoever thought he could be that?
person tottallylost027955
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really injoyed reading your story. i was at the edge of my sit. i could not read fast enough. but this story is just begining and i can\'t wait for the rest. i hope for a happy endding but not with out plenty of trails and objects inthe way. thank you for sharing your imagention with me . linda
person Raven
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps twisting. who sent her stuff?
why was it in coffins? what will happen if harry and
hermiony forget that their marriage is fake
because of the memory thing. ooo this is really good
lv Ravn
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