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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! Poor Hermione! I thought I was a bitch for killing off her parents in my story, but, girl you\'ve definitely got the ways-to-hurt-Hermione title down! Not sure if that\'s good or bad, but YS eYS emotional reading NEV NEVER get emotional over fanfic. Okay, yes, I get really really angry sometimes...
But I never get teary! And I definitely did just that with that chapter. I liked the way you brought God into the Grangers\' letter. I really don\'t get how people get so pissy about Harry Potter being the root of all evil and things like that. As far as I\'m concerned (and I TEACH Catholocism to grade schoolers), aren\'t we supposed to believe that \"with God all things are possible?\" And if so, doesn\'t that involve witchcraft and magic, which is not even portrayed negatively in the books?
Okay, hopping off soap box now...
Very good chapter- well worth the wait! And though I may be driven mad by anticipation, I say take as long as you need to update. like I tell GrrArrg- people will wait for genius. It\'s the uncomplicated, unmoving stories that get lost in the shuffle! Yours rocks and will forever be on my rec list. Unless you kill Hermione or something. That may be unforgiveable. =)
Keep up the awesome work!
But I never get teary! And I definitely did just that with that chapter. I liked the way you brought God into the Grangers\' letter. I really don\'t get how people get so pissy about Harry Potter being the root of all evil and things like that. As far as I\'m concerned (and I TEACH Catholocism to grade schoolers), aren\'t we supposed to believe that \"with God all things are possible?\" And if so, doesn\'t that involve witchcraft and magic, which is not even portrayed negatively in the books?
Okay, hopping off soap box now...
Very good chapter- well worth the wait! And though I may be driven mad by anticipation, I say take as long as you need to update. like I tell GrrArrg- people will wait for genius. It\'s the uncomplicated, unmoving stories that get lost in the shuffle! Yours rocks and will forever be on my rec list. Unless you kill Hermione or something. That may be unforgiveable. =)
Keep up the awesome work!
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 - I think I\'m going to be ill (and for once not because of the pregnancy - I think it was your stories that helped with this condition in the first place, btw) the Grangers, ugh, horrible people that was clearly conveyed. Your Severus is very cool. Thanks and loving this story.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter baby! The letter is very emotional and powerful. It really conveys the message that the parents disapprove. Very good imagery. I love the description. Keep the chapters coming!
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. Nice commentary!
LB
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I\'m going to go and keep reading!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the first stories I read on AFF, and I thought it was fantastic! Please keep updating. It\'s fascinating and VERY well written. The caskets and explanation of them were a great touch!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! That was a beautiful chapter. Horribly sad, but beautiful. I\'m swear I\'m about to cry. I do understand, now, mea meaning of the caskets... I just don\'t understand how any parents could be that evil. It makes me think that they never really loved her in the first place, because if they did, the would have at least heard her out!
The part after Severus read the letter was so beautiful. He\'s exactly what she needs right now and I just wish that they could really be together - to the whole world! I wish that Severus didn\'t have to pretend to be the hating bastard to her and that Harry didn\'t have to pretend to be Sebastian\'s father and married to Hermione! It\'s not fair! Hermione deserves some happiness after all this pain!
Sorry, I was rambling! Anyway! That was a GREAT chapter! Please update again soon!
Tanya~
The part after Severus read the letter was so beautiful. He\'s exactly what she needs right now and I just wish that they could really be together - to the whole world! I wish that Severus didn\'t have to pretend to be the hating bastard to her and that Harry didn\'t have to pretend to be Sebastian\'s father and married to Hermione! It\'s not fair! Hermione deserves some happiness after all this pain!
Sorry, I was rambling! Anyway! That was a GREAT chapter! Please update again soon!
Tanya~
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you updated this story. I feel so bad for Hermoine! Her parents are cruel and heartless. I also feel horrible for Severus, he has to stay in the sidelines.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What horrible parents! How could they turn their backs on her when she needed them most? I hope you weren\'t refering to her parents as Christians because a real Christian has the love of God in them and should never disown their child but forgive and guide and love! So sad! But anyway, I look forward to your next chapter.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...how sad. Her parents, for lack of a better word, suck. I really think that this update was worth waiting for. I truly want Hermione and Severus to be happy. Cripes, I cannot believe what a baby I am for a happy ending! Thanks for updating.