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person WizardingAngel
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man this story is something else all to gether and I really hope you can finnish it all the way i want to see more...................... as alll ways keep up on the great work
person VegasVWchiK
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! My my most favorite local writer finally posted an update :) j/k I love where this is going, I looked for it on L&LS but it wasn\'t there :*( I can\'t wait for your next update!
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good, especially the last chapter! I hope to read mooon.oon.

Ciao ^_^
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter was awesome. I loved how Severus came shopping with them. Good job on that. And the Drinteinteraction was very unexpected. Can\'t wait to get more on that one. This is a very interesting development.
person Meg
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* This just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work so I can continue reading this wonderful story. I hopis wis will become a series. Seeing Snape as a father brings thoughts of a challenge for him.
person Raven
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooo that was soo good! poor miony. and poor snape. cant wait for nect chappie
loads o luv Ravn xxx
person Dawn
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just wanted to let you know what a great story you are writing. You do very well at keeping most characters fairly true to form -- although I always thought of \'Mione\'s family as supportive! -- and your story is interesting and keeps me coming back for more :) You\'re a great writer, you have great ideas, and the combination is making an excellent fanfic, keep it coming :)

Thanks!
~Dawn
person Heather
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LET SEVERUS AT EM!! OH....those bastards. Ugh. *fuming*

At least she and Sebastian will always have Hogwarts. Those bastards.

Am thoroughly enjoying your fic, as if you couldn\'t tell!!

Heather
person PaganPoetry
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww poor Hermione! But at least she has Harry, Ron and Severus and people. Please let there be more soon? :D
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Nineteen: False memories and a letter

One word comes to mind here.... WOW!!! From start to finish, this chapter was AMAZING!!! I LOVE the way that Severus gives her reassurance that she is his & she is loved, though I think it serves him as much as it does her!!!

YES, you answered my question about the coffins & I don\'t think you flaked out on why you used coffins at all!!! I think it made perfect sense & did show what pieces of shit her parents were!!! As for your question to me: \"Did I go too far?\" Not only no, but HELL NO!!! I think you did a fabulous job of showing them as the hypocritical & self righteous people that they are for speaking of God in one breath while throwing away their own child in another!!!

I am glad that she has Severus & their son, but I think it is so very important that Ron & Harry are being so supportive, she really needs them a lot!!! Of course there is also Albus & Minerva, which rounds out REAL faL family quite nicely!!!

I LOVE the way you ended it, what Hermione wished for her parents, I wish them the same 1,000 fold!!!

I am really looking forward to your next update, can\'t wait for chapter 20!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<