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person z26
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this R.A.T thing is a good idea. Thanks for writing!
person WizardingAngel
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who would have thunk it?????? that was a great chapter and I like this story as it goes on. keep up the great work.
person scifichick774
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. You\'ve kept the plot rolling along so smoothly, even with the little twists and turns. Nicely done.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU for adding me to your notification list!!!

Chapter Chapter Twenty-One: R.A.T. ~~~ WOW!!! I have to say that this caught me completely urprurprise, but a nice surprise it is!!! I guess I\'ve gotten so used to Draco & his lot being the \'bad guys\' in so many stories that I never expected this from them at all!!! After hearing just that little bit about what these kids have gone through is just so sad, how can parents do that to their children:( I am glad to see that they are doing something about it!!!

I really can\'t wait to see how the rest of this meeting goes!!! Will Severus tell them the truth about Hermione & the baby? Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
person SandraM
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So Draco\'s on the right side of the fence. Interesting.
person scifichick774
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I spend the last two hours reading this fic from start to finish and it just ends there?? *pouts* I realize that you just updated (or it wouldn\'t have been on the first page), but I\'d love it if you\'d post again. Prettyase ase with sugar on top?
person ancientgirl
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting development with Draco. I wonder what that was about too. I\'m glad that Hermoine and Severus are tryign to be as normal a family behind the scenes as possible. Its too bad they have to keep things a secret. Thanks for updating.
person MeganAnn
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I discovered your story on MetaMuse\'s favorite stories links, and if not for school I would have read all that you have in one sitting! Your story is amazing, and I am enraptured by it. You a v a very talented writer, and it makes me grin every time you make me tihnk of Snape as a dad. It\'s so cute! If I wasn\'t in suck a hurry to get to the next chapter, I would have reviewed each one, so let me sum it all up in on review: YOU KICK SO MUCH ASS! I\'m sooo lovin\' it. Keep it up and post asap. ~*~Luv- MeganAnn. The wanna-be daughter of Snape~*~
person Midnight Tiger
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a great chapter!!! i am so excited to see what you do with Draco. the story keeps getting more interesting. So, is your Draco the much loved \'I\'m afraid of my father\'s wrath and therefore doing as he wishes\' or the \'i wish i could be one of you all but my destiny points somewhere else so now that i realize i dont need to hate you i wish to help\' type...? curiouser and curiouser....hehe i really liked Sevi\'s presence on the shopping trip, and the fact that he followed draco out. and i hope you write out one of those scenes where the \'alpha males\' start butting heads and ron lightens things up. i think that will be amusing!
thanks for posting!
person MsPixie
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this fic is excellent! I enjoy the way you write, it\'s fluid yet you describe all the necessary detail. I was a bit shocked when they really made Harry the \'husband\'. I can just imagine on how that goewn wwn with old Voldie .. his biggest enemy just produced offspring. Talk about having two thorns in his side now. Snape being the father almost seems harmless (well, underline that almost, twice. :) ) Anyway, I can