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person nesscafe
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There are a few bad apples in every group, for example those Muslim Alkida nuts that crashed into the World Trade Center. Just because a few crazy fundamentalists did bad things doesn\'t mean I think all Muslims think that way or will act that way. I am well aware that Christians are strong and notorious in their views of pre-marital sex and single parenthood. My mother was raised in a strict Catholic home. I mean no meat on Friday, mass every Sunday even if you are near death, no birth control for grandma (she had 8 kids and wne one of 13 from her mother), the whole deal. My mother has never been married. That means she had me out of wedlock. While the Catholic church refused to Christen me and acknowledge me, my grandparents were very supportive of my mother. I have more cousins then I can count and of all their grandkids I was the only one that was spoiled to the point of my mother going into fits while my grandma said her favorite line, \"You let that girl have that! She\'s a good kid and she\'s not hurting anything!\" In short, I guess I am just bothered that you wrote her parents that way under the guise of being Christians, but it is your story and everyone is entitled to artistic licenses, right?

Moving on I loved the last 2 chapters! LOVED \'EM!!! I loved how Harry and Severus are described as beinging alfa males! And the whole thing in the last chapter w/ R.A.T. was so unexpected! I really loved that! I can\'t wait to see how all the Slytherin students fold into the story now! Really cool! Hope you can update again soon!
person Snapeaholic
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Who knew the kids would be anti-Deatheaters! Great twist here. I\'m really looking forward to see where this goes!

person spaz141
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so cool all those Slitherins working on their own to protect Harry. an interesting and fresh twist. You are brilliant I *heart* your work. Thanks.
person ldf
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sneak, sneak, sneak, sneak, sneak, sneak!

goodness, Draco has brains and knows how to use them
for something other than being a snob. i am shocked. and the
other members of R.A.T. ~giggles uncontrollably~ i love the
name of the group and the fact that all the members are
children of known Death Eaters. what a lovely twist, darling.

i really like where you took this. it\'s good.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person Tanya
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In all actuality, the route you\'re taking the Slytherins surprised me at first. After giving it some thought, though, it makes sense. I\'m not going to explain why, because *obviously* you already know. But this chapter was a great addition to this wonderful fic and I do hope you\'ll update again soon!
Tanya~
person aprilgrey
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, what a surprise! Just as I felt like the story was winding down, it picks up a whole new angle. Terrific work. Many thanks for your sharing it! Hugs, April
person Silvana
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! That\'s a heck of a plot twist, RWH! Veddy interestink.
person ancientgirl
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow what an incredible development! I\'m so glad you decided to make some of the Slytherins into a group opposed to Voldemorts plans. Its like Harry\'s DA except they aren\'t as nice but basically working for the same cause. Great chapter.
person Michelline
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow! Awesome. I loved the meeting with the Death Eater Children. Too cool! Anyway, I can\'t wait to see where this goes from now on. You\'ve held me spellbound in this story and I live for your updates (OK that\'s a bit of an exaggeration, but heck. It does make my day when I see that this has been updated). SO... Go ahead and make my day!
person Julie
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!! This is so good. The plot is wonderful and I love the twists and turns thta keep happening. I am reading at the edge of my seat! This is great! Update soon! Please!