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person Tanya
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoooHooo! I loooved that chapter! Even though it was a short, intermission, sort of chapter that only really let us get inside Hermione\'s head, it really did set the stage for the next chapter, which I am anxiously awaiting!

Of course I\'ve kinda caught on to your thinking... I am, after all, a fellow fanfiction writer! Hehe... anywho! I love you work and I hope you update again soon!

Tanya~
person spaz141
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cool. I hope she didn\'t blow her cover. Enjoyable as usual, thanks.
person ldf
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
did i mention i really like this story?
~grins impishly~

nice twist.

*hugs*

~blessings~

ldf
person Anna-chan
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, is this good. Please update soon! *in overly-dramatic voice* I yearn for it! I pine! I even oak! *giggles* Sorry. I just had a cup of caffinated tea, and I\'m not used to having caffine all that often, so...erm.....yea. =^.^= Anywho, please update soon!
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione, a baby, Severus and a pissed off bunch of Slytherins and Gryffindors. I get the feeling that things are going to get ugly, or Hermione is going to stupefy them all...heheh. There\'s a nice thought. Loverly update...could we have another?
person Heather
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I have mentioned it before, but I am in love with this story. Beautiful. This isn\'t just an empty chapter. It was a nice moment between mother and son, and it was touching.

Heather
person MeganAnn
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO! How could you do this to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must know what will happen next! The cru........ the cruelty...... Okay, anyway, great chapter! I was so excited when I saw that there was a new chapter! I check every time I get on and periodically through the time i\'m on, and this time I was rewarded with a new chapter! More of your great writing. I LOVE you! Lol. Please PLEASE keep up the amazing writing! I don\'t have to tell you to make the next chapter good because I know you will, but just incase.... Make the next chapter really really good! Thanks so much for writing this, and once again letting me see my name! You\'re a great writer and an amazing person overall, from what I\'ve see so far. Keep up te AMAZING work! (And never leave me hanging like that again!)
person M
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK I totally understand why he had to be short with her but \"OUCH\". I\'m curious, how involved will Zabiniin tin this fic. It\'s a character I\'ve seen done so many different ways, can\'t wait to read your version.
person Julie
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoops! Obliviates all around or what? This was good...I am hoping for more to come! :)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty-two: Musing and a confrontation... Yet another WONDERFUL chapter to this AMAZING story!!! Hermione\'s mus wer were so very touching!!! I am happy to hear that she is seeing a future with Severus!!! I am sure that there will be issues to overcome, but Severus loves her & wouldn\'t do anything to hurt her again!!! I also like what she said to her son, very heart & l & loving!!!

I take it that Ron & Harry haven\'t bothered to listen to Severus about Draco & crew?!? I guess you can\'t really blame them, they have been enemies for so long!!! I hope that since Hermione is now e the that they can get something accomplished & put their wands away!!!

I am really looking forward to hearing what happened at the R.A.T. meeting after Severus showed them that he was there!!! Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^<