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person Ashley
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I can\'t wait for more. :)
person Phantasia
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying this story please update soon
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! interesting turn of events with the DARATs LOL! Well I hope you update soon.
person palkitty
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the story and it\'s been keeping me on edge. I really liked the part with snape in the quiditch store and the RAT meeting. That was just perfect. I cracked up laughing when he uncovered himself.
~pal
person nesscafe
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN a new chapter! Woo Hoo! And it\'s not even my birthday yet! That would be the 16th! ;c) Bummer bout the computer probs, but I\'m so thrilled about the chapter! Interesting idea about having liason thn the other Houses! I really like the new name DaRAT! That was a cool combination! More please! More!
person Madamme Cerise
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That, my dear Writing Hood, was EXTREMELY well written. Encore, I say, encore.
After reading the tale written so far, I felt I simply HAD to commend you, on both your writing, and the story you spun.
You have a firm grasp of the language (it is excellent), and your story is written in such a way that one does not have to waste time deciphering the grammatical errors, spelling etc.(Which by by the way, very frustratin
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There aren\'t many fics that are written so well that the reader could actually concentrate on the plot, and find the reading so easy, and with a flowing structure. Yours is such a fic, and for this I thank and applaud you.
\"A Secret Worth Keeping\" was a satisfying read. Your characters were believable and very much \'in-character\', the tale was plausible, and the ideas were interes.
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As well as being imaginative, I found your fic to be an all-round good read.
I look forward to the next chapter.
Admiringly, Cerise.
person illnevertell
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I cant tell you how much I am loving this story. It is absolutely wonderful. I read all 26 chapters in one sitting. I couldn\'t stop.It is incredible and I got so absorbed in it. I cant wait to read more of it. I hope you will post more chapters soon. This really is one of best fics I have ever read, and I have read a ton.
You have a genuine talent and I hope you will continue to share your work with us. * kudos * I really love the way you have made Draco into a good guy without being Too good. He still has that cocky malfoy attitude but under it he is becoming his own man. I always hoped that in the end Draco Malfoy could find redemption. I think you have shown it is a possibility in a way that is in keeping with the nature of a slytherin. Devious but not truly evil.

~ Jaimie ~
person SamiJo
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story, I cant wait to read what happens next. PLEASE HURRY!!!
person MeganAnn
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovelovelovelovelovelove!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE! That last scene was so cute. SO. CUTE. So cute. I loved it. I have to go read it again or else I would praise you more, but, alas, I must go read more. MORE! I want more. Lol. Very excelently done chapter, very nice, very nice. Lol. Keep up the fantastical work. It was loved. As you can see. I\'m rambling.... lol.
person Midnight Tiger
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL chapter as always. I liked his reference to Moses ahe che comparisons made there, and the scene with Severus and Hermione was perfect, and honest and very insightful. i have always loved the way you write the interactions in you story, its so real, and true to life. meetmeeting of DaRat was a wonderful success and i really enjoyed the switching of houses bit. and found it VERY funny that Severus had to take control of the meeting after Dumbledore lost control. :) nice to see the old wizard in need from time to time. ::hugs:: thanks so much for posting and for using the name. made me smile big time!