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person Delayed Poet
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I missed a chapter, but I\'ve got my computer back now and I\'m up and running again! I loved these two chapters! I really like where you\'re going with the Hermione/counselor thing.... I\'m not sure that any of the Slytherins would be willing to talk to her, but knowing that she\'s there if they ever need her would probably be an immense comfort. I had no idea about your experience and I\'m sorry that you have had that personal experience... I, luckily, have never experienced it first hand, but I\'ve talked to many rape/molestation victims, so I feel I have a pretty good idea of the many different ways a victim reacts... Anywho! Loved the kissing scene and Sebastian interrupting! So like children (not that I have any of my own to base that on). Please update again soon!
Tanya~
person midnight tiger
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, girl! I dont know what to say! i was amused by how the boys practically ran...(ok so that DID Run) when she started to get angery. Severus doesnt seem to have any problems deeling with her temper. I think that its a wonderful idea to have Hermione talk to the girls (and boys too) and cant wait to see how that goes. i am also curious as to how much she will tell them. i mean, its easy enough to say she and harry were together and she found out she was prego, then was raped...or something like that.
Oh and the kiss....::sigh:: perfect. :)
thanks so much for posting!
person LadyJenny
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another one, Another one, Another one......Yeah this one was good to, and just makes you want more.....Darn you lady!!!
Wonderful Job and amazing story, this chapter was a real icebreaker for them, and the story and I can\'t wait to see the next chapter!!!!
Keep up the really good work!
Thank yo for the update!
Update soon, Please!
LadyJenny
person Davina Icaras
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hiya! WOW, finally Hermoine and Severus, kissing!!! And Sebastian really has amazing timing :grin: It was a very explainatory (i probably spelled that wrong but whatever) chapter and i think a great way for Hermy to be involved with DaRats but without many chance to get herself hurt! My muse has left me too for the moment, but i\'ll see her tomorrow and maybe i can finally get started on that fic i promised you :D But anyways, keep on going \'cause everytime there\'s a new chapter i\'m more and more curious about what happens next :biggrin:
Blessed be and keep up the good work! Davina Icaras
person PotionsMistressM
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SMOOCHIES!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! I cannot tell you how awesome that chapter was, but I believe I shall try. That was SO hot! And it was only a kiss! It was literally breathtaking, and I simply CANNOT wait for more. Which of course, I do not mean literally, because I know I HAVE to wait, but it will be with bated breath! OH, you rock so hard! If you were anywhere near me I would hug you! And I\'m not big on the whole people thing, so that\'s big! Anyways, great, awesome, excellent, magnificent job! You make me want to update mine faster just to say thank you (which of course I won\'t \'cause everyone\'s being butt-monkeys with the whole not reviewing thing)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I like the comfort level Severus and Hermione are reaching. I like how you have built their trust and that\'s important for the next step in their relationship. Please update soon.
person Kate
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! i cant wait for u 2 carry on and see how far there relationship can go, i think harry and ron are being incredible about it. I LOVE DRACO! on the way to see the 3rd film now!!
person Jordy
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Bounces happily**

Yay! An update! The light at tnd ond of my dreary day\'s tunnel. (Issues with the 7 year old.)

I\'m glad that she took the news well. She seemed tke tke the news REALLY well, too! :o)

Too bad for certain interruptions...
I hate when that happens.
person deblovesdragon
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(sigh) They kissed. It was nice. (sighs again)
I am particularly glad that Hermione was comfortable with Severus. No nasty rape flashbacks or anything.
Cheers.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Before I get started on this chapter, I just want to say (now that I know for sure) how impressed I am of that lullaby!!! You did a FABULOUS job writing it!!!

Part 28, Chapter twenty-six: Persuasion...

Quite the interesting job he enlisted her for!!! I do hope that she will find it satisfying & rewarding, not only helping others, but helping herself at the same time!!!

It was so nice to see the two of them get that little bit closer!!! I really am looking forward to the process of her wanting him more!!! I have tried to imagine how you will write their REAL 1st time & I can only picture it as ROMATIC & BEAUTIFUL!!! However you get them to that point, I know it will be GOOOOOOOOOOD!!!

As always I will be watching for your next update & hope Frank will be cooperative so she can be ungrounded ;-) Til chapter 27, Deb >^..^<