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person vania
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My Dear you have a FANTASTIC story!!!! You are a genius and your writing is great! Please up data as soon as you can! I\'m at loss at word to express how much i love your story... I\'m sorry, but i can not do the spelling correctly, being portuguese nor can i be of great importance, but i do want to say thank you for your work, it\'s the best i\'ve read in months.
love vania
person quartz
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and realistic!!!! ;-)
person M
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy Cows!! How did I miss this many chapters? But it\'s a nice surprise and made for a nice afternoon of reading. Your Hermione has more control than I would have. LOL Great work I can\'t wait for the rest.
person PotionsMistressM
schedule July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you and your semantics! Bitch, bastard... I\'m an equal opportunity swearer!

Anyway, the chapter... All I can say is that it was truly BEAUTIFUL! I literally had to stop reading when Severus was asking her to come to his bed because I was so overcome! That section was so, so beautiful, and (BIG compliment - pr- probably the biggest I could ever give) it reminded me SO, SO much of Erik from \"The Phantom of the Opera!\" It was SO, SO, SO good- he\'s so needy in so many ways! Oh, God! I want a Severus of my very own!

Wow. Cold shower time. Honestly, this was just so... breathtaking.

Will you marry me?

Oh, wait. I\'m already betrotto Gto GrrArrg. But I love you anyway!

More soon, PLEASE!!!
person Davina Icaras
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I wish I had a guy who was that romantic to me! *sigh* And thank you for the candles, I thought it might come back in this kinda way...
Snape is really a true man of his word, and i really loved reading this chapter! I cant wait till the next chapter, but i\'ve got enough work for my current fic to keep me busy :D We\'re drawing to the end, and i\'ll try to translate it to English but i\'m afraid it\'ll take a while since i\'m on holiday from August the 2nd to the 16th. But the upside of that is offcource being able to read a lot of new chapters from al the fics i\'m reading :D So, till the next time and have fun writing,
love and blessed be, Davina
person rainasnape
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I worship the very ground you walk on now. Loved that candle thing it was wonderful. *nudges Hermione* She needs to loosen up a bit...But that chapter was great *claps*
person ancientgirl
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sweet last chapter. I\'m glad they are at least sharing the same bed. She can see that he really does care about her and is taking her needs into consideration before his. Of course he faltered a little bit there but only because he wants her so badly, but he stopped when she said so and that is part of the trust they are building. Can\'t wait for the next update.
person June W
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh ... I love this chapter! So sweet, so tender, so loving -- he\'s doing exactly the right thing, going slowly with her. I am SO glad they\'re in bed together, finally! Without the baby, Ron, Harry, Draco, DaRats, anyone else. My only complaint is that the chapter ended, so please update soon! (Not to be an \"arncbair writer,\" but I hope she stays in his bed every night from now on.)
person spaz141
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and I think realistic. I did keep thinking that there was no way Sebastian is sleeping through the night already - I kept waiting for him to cry and stop things. Its better that they stopped things on their own though.

On a personal note - had my baby on the 16th, he\'s a boy. 2 girls and 2 boys for me...I am so done.
person severessa
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes!!! Severus and candlelight...One cannot have a better visual than that! I like the way their relationship is developing, also. This is such a very cool story!