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person Siren
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will go nutters if you don't update. It's that good. Siren
person spaz141
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thanks RWH for the congratulations, he is a fanta bab baby.
I enjoyed the chapter and being the H/Hr shipper that I am I get all giddy over the fake marriage. Silly me. Thanks for the update.
person helen
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for continuing this great story. I can't wait to discover where you are going to lead my favourite characters !!
person severessa
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am sooo glad you are still working on this story! You are doing well, even through brain freeze. I attempted to rewiew your last two chapters, but ff.net was having some server problems and I couldn't get through. Be assured, though, this is still one of my favorites, and I check in frequently to see how things are going!
person ancientgirl
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved this last chapter. I especially liked how both Hermione and Severus were talking about when "they are married," and how "they will miss their son" when he goes to Hogwarts. It shows that the expect to spend their lives together, its something just assumed, which I think is a sign of two people wanting the same thing and knowing it doesn't necesarrily have to be spoken. I feel bad for Severus though having to sit back and let everyone think the baby is Harry's and that he and Hermione are married. I can't wait for the time to reveal the truth. There are going to be a lot of open mouths.

Just one complaint, really more like a plea. PLEASE don't keep us waiting to long for another chapter. I know writers block canbad,bad, but I hope you don't suffer from it again.
person Ginny the slut
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So good, I could die waiting for you to upidate, Please make it soon, such a good story
person Davina Icaras
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I was just wandering around the site, waiting for the next chapter, and couldn't resist posting another review :D I forgot about the edit of chapter 29, and just wanted to say that it indeed is a better chapter now :D And I was just wondering; how did you find the name for Severus' bird? I usually have a horrible time coming up with names for familiars, so I thought I'd ask you for your source ;) And also an update from my fic; I've started translating it, but I think it'll take some time... Mostly because I now have someone new in my life to distract me, and he's doing far too well a job in it, if you know what I mean :grin: So, I'm looking forward to reading some more, it always makes my day! :D Love, and blessed be, Davina
person firestarter
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
beautiful chapter. severus's emotions and care were extreemly well written. Good job:)
person pixi
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gah you somehow managed to sneak updates past me!

Great job. I love how this is turning out. I adore DaRats....
person moe
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOD i love it, the last chapter was great!!!! I LOVE IT!!! can i say it enough............ MORE PLEASE!!!
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