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Chapter 32 finally up? It\'s been up, or at least you\'ve posted it on another site. I thought this was an update. Please update.

This is a really great story. I like the RATS. Good writing.

cdk

I have not read this story in a long time and I have just know finished the rafteafter Ileft it on one of those chapters. I love this story very much and it kinda hits home with me but any well written and as always keep up with the excellent work

WOW, i am so happy you finally updated,i have been biting my nails waiting for this next, chappie but it was well worth it, THANKS for another great chapter, to this incredibly GREAT story :)

Wow!! I love it, it has so much emotion in it that it makes me cry sometimes! ^_^ Please continue it!!

I have just read your story, all 32 chapters, I really have no idea how I've missed it before.
Its great, so special, recently some of the fanfics story lines have been very dark in content,
so it was a pleasure to find such a enchanting story.

I'm hoping Pancy comes to the right decision for her, as one of my special friends would say
so mote it be.

Blessed be, update soon.

Great chapter...even if it struggled getting out. :) I can hardly wait to see what revenge they'll take on Lucius...and also how Hermione's parents get their come-uppance.
Now, just a friendly grammar note (please don't take this the wrong way): When denoting posession and the word or name ends in an "s", only an apostrophe is needed, ex: instead of Severus's, it is Severus'; also, and this catches many, many people: "its" is the posessive of it, while "it's" is the contraction of it is. Finally, the school's name is written as Hogwarts, rather than Hogwart's (the posessive would be Hogwarts'). Very, very minor, but I thought you might like to know.
Looking forward to upcoming chapters...this is a really great story!

You are a brilliant writer and I really look forward to reading your work, however...I must make my exit here for this particular fic. I don't wao so start any debate, I just need to back out now and I wish you all the best in completing this story. I will keep an eye out for an update on To Love and To Lose - what are Jessica and Severus up to anyway? Thanks for writing!

Heya! After a long day at work, finally a new chapter to read in bed! Severus and Hermione are really getting a real relationship now, and i like it! Hermoine is now really taking care of Pansy, and Severus is doing his best to help her, the darling :grin: I enjoyed reading about Hermoine's feelings, and how she and Severus are coping with seeing each other in classes, although i think that they won't keep it up for long ;p

And yes, my boyfriend is still distracting me, i've told him to stop so he gives me regular times to write, which i always manage to double :grin:
Because i'm busy with other stuff, my muse has decided to leave me for the moment, so i'm afraid you'll have to wait for my fic ..
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wow,this story is so great!i just read the whole thing!oh,i can't wait to read more!coming from a young mother(i was 21 when i had my liam)well,that's not so young compared to today.i don't agree with abortion personally, but i think that you should have the right, if you want it.it's nice to see pansy so sweet.did you get the d'lacour name in the story from fleur in GOF?KEEP WRITING!