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person SP777
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading #32, I can say that Ron was thoroughly...THOROUGHLY pimp-slapped or should I say BITCH-slapped! :-) *Ka-pow!!!*

Also I think I prefer reading this story here at AFF.net, instead of the other site, sometimes those guys over are TOO restrictive at times...and don\'t give much warning when getting rid of certain stories, in my opinion.
person countrymouse
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello there Red:

I just discovered this story, through another author\'s recc, and I have spent most of last night (until 1 am ) and most of today reading it! (Thank goodness it\'s the holidays and I can get away with doing that!) I notice you last updated about a week ago, and since I\'m new to it, I don\'t know the frequency of your updating, but I do hope it\'s SOON! This is a tremendous and most enjoyable story, and you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next installment! Do please allow me to send some Pepper-Up Potion to your Muse to help her along her way so that more glimpses into this beautiful story may speedily appear! Congrats!!!

Best wishes,
Countrymouse
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Read chap 33 ,
Now it\'s really starting to get intruiging indeed ,Draco playing cloak and dagger against his father *Shivers*
Boy talk about real gumption and courage indeed, normally I veiw Draco in a bad light when it comes to HG/SS stuff, but this indeed is an eyeopener indeed, you have given Draco a chance at redeeming himself in both his own veiw and severus\'s congrats

I don\'t blame Draco from making himsrelf a smaller target, Luicius is indeed a wizard not too be taken lightlly

I paitentlly await furthert indeed
Darksoul~
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I love it! I hope you update really soon!
person Midnight Tiger
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wahooo!!! thanks for updating! kick butt chapter. i really liked Draco in this though i really want to see more of the whole Hermione Pansy babby thing. thanks so much for posting. :)
person June W
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 33 - THANK YOU for the new chapter!!! Scary, the idea of Lucius still obsessed with Hermione, and even more scary to know that Lucius knows how to use Legilimency. Does Severus know that? If so, Severus might want to teach Occlumency to Hermione and Draco. I can\'t think of why Lucius forced Severus to rape Hermione, but I\'m glad the baby is Severus\' and not Lucius\' baby - eww! When will Draco find out that it was his father who was ultimately responsible for Sebastian\'s conception? I think the knowledge of it would make Draco even more determined to protect Sebastian and defeat the Death Eaters. Oooh, I need to read another chapter - please update again soon! Oh, and don\'t forget Pansy!
person kari
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i started reading this story out of idle curiousity and boredom. however, it is very well written and addictive. a little ooc but the story line is unique enough and interesting enough to hold my interest, at least long enough for me to read it in one sitting. i am eagerly awaiting the following chapter. my compliments to the author.
person Davina Icaras
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heya! Just a little update on my own story (and secretly a plea for more chapters ;) ) ; I\'m now registered to Fictionpress.com, under Davina Icaras, and that\'s where i\'m going to put my original story, when i finally get around to translating it ;) And no, not my boyfriend is distracting me, other things are happening right now, but i\'ll find an hour or so to do it soon :D
So, hope to see y
person Lu LIng Qi
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must have more of this story
person Jayne Elizabeth
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg! I loved when severus drank herm\'s brest milk! that is just SO sexy! do it again! PLEASE!

god this story is so hot. i cant wait till they do it, you\'ve been drawing it out for so long, when it finally happens its gonna be like \"WOOOOO\" or \"YESSS\" or \"BOO YA\"

lol

Jayne Elizabeth