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I have been following this from the beginning and I really enjoy it but I am starting to lose the momentum a bit. Any chance of updating more regularly? I like the plot and the writing.

I just LOVE this story :) - I started reading a few days ago.. and I found myself wanting to read more ;) You\'re an inspiration for us fellowwriters ;)
Keep up the good work !! Looking forward to an update
Hugs
Snapesangel

Yay! Chapter 35! Go Red! And LDF!
I liked the interaction between Ron and Hermione...and love the ideation of Ron and Pansy forming some kind of friendship, bond, romance.... I do hope he gets the full story from her next chapter or two. :) And Severus, Sebastion and Hermione moments are prechious as ever....:)

I don\'t think you took too long this time. I did not mind the wait. Been working on Chaos Destiny (the story with Rhiannon and Saraid) its complex. Chapter one is giving me hell. I think I need a Betta for it to give me some helpful pointers. Not so much on the elements in the story, but on ideas for what to do with aspects of it and how it sounds. Grrrr....Its proving difficult. Also need to re-edit chapter two of one of my stories already on here (Tortured Child, Whom I Love or TCWIL). Still haven\'t finished chapter one for Wolf\'s Visions either. That chapters\'s been giving me trouble too. Why is it Chapter Ones are the hardest chapters? WHY????

Anyway, without giving away much, Chaos Destiny is a story based on the RPG Game of Ironclaw, which can be learned about (and the instruction books and supplements can be bought here: www.Sanguine.com ). Its an anthropomorphic/furry story involving five main characters, of which Rhiannon is a small black wolf with red eyes, from the Bisclavret people and Saraid is a taller black wolf with green eyes, from the Phelan people, of the Cell Tribe, (Phelan are basically a people similar to our worlds old Celtic peoples) and the Phelan and Bisclavret, while cousin wolf peoples, are not on good terms with each other. The Phelan view the Bisclavret as Fallen, having given up their once-Phelan clan of Bianfaela, and gone more modernistic and getting involved with modern trappings of guns and following a feudal lifestyle. The Bisclavret, however, view their Phelan cousins as wild savages who follow backward ways and remain ignorant, and are basically a mystery to all other Noble Houses, with their Druids and Old Ways of laws and the little change to their way of life.

The world of Ironclaw itself is set in the renaissance/medieval type era where many races exist: equine, feline, canine, and others. There\'s the House of Bisclavret (Wolves), Avoirdupois (Horses), Doloreux (Boars), Chevernaise(Goats), Rinaldi (Foxes) and the common people (most other races). Its a highly politically-minded world with all the noble houses competing against one another, most eager to expand their territory and influence but currently in stalemate.

As for the story idea, it came about through a roleplay online with my then boyfriend and now husband, and I have been working on it into a fanfic story. The game itself is quite fun, but I sometimes lack getting into my characters in tabletop rpgs.

More later, if you still are interested....

~Starwolf~

squee! kick butt chapter hun. thanks for positng

Chapter 35 was very interesting indeed.
I forgot the Malfoy\'s had a Personal owl
*Smacks head*

Well I better get cracking on my own HP fic(Which has been woefully lacking in torture indeed!)
Wishing you well and a Crucio up the Dark Lords fat arse!

BrianDarksoul

Ahhhh! You have to update! I love this story. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!

Nooooo, where, what, how? Ive just found this story and read all 35 chapters and now it stops? Youre killing me here. Is Ron going to stand by Pansy? Is Hemione going to let Severus in? (lol). I love your version of paternal Severus, the family scenes make my stomach go all fluttery. As for that Lucius, someone ought to give that man a good old kick in the knackers. I really hope you get the next chapter up soon, I\'m not sure how long I can wait. Rest assured, as soon as you post, I\'m going to be on here reading. It\'s refreshing to read a SS/HG that is more than PWP. If your muse keeps doing a runner, do what was suggested to me and lock it in a cage next to your pc the next time it shows up. lol. Waiting with baited breath for your next instalment. xx

I am glad that you updated. I have been reading this one since the beginning and I still love it. Am thinking of re-reading it from the beginning. LOL. I hope that Hermione and Snape do get to have some fun soon. Your version of HG/SS deserve some at this point. hee hee. Well done and update when you can. thank you.

I love this story! Its so cute how Severus treats Hermione. Hopefully Lucious doesnt find out.Does on get together with Pansy? That would be great! Well i hope you update soon!!
Lia

this story would suck without me?!?!?!?

damn, either i\'m really flattered or my
eyes are playing tricks on my and i
simply have a huge ego.

at any rate, you know i love giving
you a hand, doll.

you\'ve done so much for me and all...

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf