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person midnight tiger
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... im waiting for more with baited breath! this was wonderful. he is being so considerate (wish my first had been that sweet) thanks for a wonderful chapter and i look forward to more. thanks for posting!
person BotticellisAngel
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Argh! The evil cliffhanger! Was there ever such an evil monstrocity as a cliffhanger? LOL just kidding. I hope you update soon. I liked that you made her nervous, as opposed to just jumping each other immediately. It was very realistic. I can\'t wait to see more!
person Susan
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Red, you have done wonderfully. That was actually so sweet. I find it hard to read some \"rape\" fics and this one was paced perfectly. You didn\'t sugar coat it, but rather, took two people who were put in a horrible predicament and made the evolving relationship spin out in it\'s own time. Have loved this story from the beginning and when it is complete I am going to read it from start to finish again. Thanks for keeping up with this and not compromising the story just for early \"smut\". You\'re doing great! Hugs, Susan
person JTBJAB
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man! Severus, so sweet is he! Bless him!

I can\'t wait for your next update!
person Severessa
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Yes! It\'s getting warmer at my house tonight! I am so glad to see you back, Red, and I hope that all remains well with you, and gets better every day.
person mysticsong1978
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delightful; look forward to more. Very sweet. I love your take on Severus - and Ron for that matter.
person June W
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 36 - thank you for updating! I don\'t mind waiting two months for a new chapter - it\'s better than waiting two years. This story is WONDERFUL, and I\'m glad you showed Hermione still struggling to get over the memory of their first time together, which is more realistic than having them just shag right off the bat. I\'m glad Severus realized it and slowed down. Now, what can we feed your muse to keep her happy?? [BTW, what things did you \"edit\" in the previous chapters? Should I re-read the other 35 chapters?]
person mo
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.. it was absolutely AWESOME!!!!!! haha i liked the convo about the penis being a person.. very funny
person avidreader
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope all is well. I send my simpathies.
person larana
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhhhh I love this story! I like the lemony goodness. Finally together. Ah, sweet satisfaction.