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person Alyse
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the best almost love sceen i have ever read...i love love love the way you write...please keep on......i read all the chapters in 1 day.....i want more... :D
person Alyse
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the best story i have ever read.....i love how it develops...its not all thrown at you at once...it takes chapters to get stuff out..its wonderful...keep going please...and could you notify me when you update...please.. :)
person BelledonnaSnape
schedule April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is there ever going to be an update!!!!! Please.....please.....please... this is one of the best Hermione-Snape fics I have read. If you don\'t update soon I think I might go Mad, not that I already am or anything.....LOL
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one of ChaosDestiny is up now....
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! YES! Next chapter! Wooohooot!!!!!!

Gads, I LOVED the talk they had about Severus\'s penis! Highly cute n Kawaii! It was darling. I dunno what else to say, but I think that was most definately my favourite part of this chapter. Not too long a wait...not really. I would like to know who the father of Pansy\'s unborn child is... maybe IF it is born, she could do a Paternity test on the child????

I\'ve been busy, somewhat, with new ideas for old existing fanfics (ones that are not up on any online site yet...) and ones that are here but I have not yet continued them... (Wolf Visions needs chapter one to be finished, TCWIL needs chapter two to be edited and put up, I have ideas for an Invader Zim fic, need to do chapter two on Has Hogwarts Gone Haywire? Welcome to the Circus..., I need to do chapter one and put it up for a currently unnamed Harry Potterverse fanfic. I also, sadly, have not put up ChaosDestiny. I edited chapter one for it... was hoping to finish a chapter or two more... before putting a few chapters up at once.)

I\'m also hoping to do a few more of the one shot My Little Pony fics. And a one shot Wolf\'s Rain or two.



~StarwolfRealms~
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Eating Popcorn*
\"Man Sevvie is a lucky bugger. He got a header...........\"

*Cho rolls her eyes*
\"Your just reading this because you hope Riddle gets mauled by ass dwelling lemmings.............\"

*Brian shrugs*
I\"I was hoping for Butt Dwelling Monkeys But that\'s doible if not more painful.............\"

*Severus sweatdrops*
\"Hermoine.........I love you I really do..........But why did you invite this psycho again for?\"


*Hermoine smirks*
\"Anti Malfoy device and Voldermort is shit scared of him. Granted no-one can really control him........He even manages to curb Dementors\"

*Severus shrugs*
\"I wondered why Azkabam was so empty? What did they do lock him up in there?\"

*Brian poutoing*n
\"I was visiting and Tormenting Lucius. How was I suposed to know that Barney was a Torture for Dementors as well.......\"

*Sreverus shudders*
\"You REALLY need to have therapy for that or Maybe I can obliviate you?
*Looks Hopefiully at Hermoine*


*Reveiwing again*
Urk Nice new chappie I better hop it before Sevie obliviates me into Next Millenia. Keep up the good work and I wish you and yourds God bless!
person Sana
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gadzooks!! Gods u really blew me out of my seat. The plot it\'s great. Simply out of this world. Please Please Submit in teh rest of the chapters. If you value teh life of your readers. ChaoticMayhem
person sevati
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hate to be all bitch-grammar queen on you, but I thought you might want to know of a incorrect word usage. It might not even by your fault, if my guess that you typed \'obliviated\' in correctly, but your spell check said \"hell no\" and changed it to \'obliterated\'. MS Word has done it to me many times, it\'s nearly as annoying as that damned paper clip. Of course, it always automatically corrects my (mis)spelling of su(r)prise, so I guess I can\'t bitch too much :)

obliterate:
1. To do away with completely so as to leave no trace. See Synonyms at abolish.
2. To wipe out, rub off, or erase (writing or other markings).
3. Medicine. To remove completely (a body organ or part), as by surgery, disease, or radiation.

It\'s in Albus\'s second letter, chapter 1. I doubt Albus would be speaking civily to Hermione if she completely removed Snape\'s memory center, or the like. Lol. Other than that, I love the fic and can\'t wait to see what will happen next. It\'s like crack, I tell you! Well, maybe not crack. Hm.. chocolate on PMS? Yeah, that suits better.
person ldf
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just had to tell you that its a stunning chapter.
done with taste and, i think , enough of a hint of
what is to come at a later time.

i believe that Hermione is progressing nicely and
that Severus is as patient as he can be.

it is a sweet, bittersweet love story and you\'re
keeping in that vein swimmingly.

brava, darling. wonderful chapter. perhaps they\'ll
get easier now. if not, you know where to find me.


and, as a side note.... ladyevilfaerie is currently
reading She Said What? so we\'ve sort of met.
~snickers~ we\'re multiplying.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person forge_underhill
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when i sat down to read this story i thought to my self \" I\'ll just read a chapter, or two...\" yeah....that didn\'t work very well. Read all of them and sat till 2 am. because your story is AMAZINGLY AWESOME!!!! I love the fact that you gave Snape a feeling-y side,eveyone has one, some just try to bury it very deep inside of them so it won\'t get hurt. Although I DO miss his beautifully sarcastic remarks. Hopefullythere will be more of them coming up! Keep up the wonderful work! blessed be