rate_review Reviews

this story is fantastic. i love the way you are giving them characters and not making cardboard figures out of the slytherins and snape. thanks!

I love this story, please post again soon. Thanks.

Oh I wanted to cry. I knew pansy lost her baby, but I didn\'t think she would have another one in there. I do hope Ron can talk to her, I really think that they would make a good couple.

It\'s about time Severus and Hermione had sex. I was fanning myself all the while reading it, really hot.

can\'t wait to read more, so yeah, I\'ll keep reading.

Please go on writing. I would like you to develop the relationship between Ron and Pansy. You did a good job with this story. At first I was a little sceptical, but it became more substantial with every chapter. I am anxiously waiting for your next chapter.

I love your story, I can\'t help but wonder what Lucius has planned for Hermione. I really like the fact that you have Ron and Pansy falling for each other. I can\'t wait to read about what happen to Pansy. She has begun to be a favorite character of mine, in my stories, and everyone elses. Please update very soon.

I think that your story is very good. The plot is very well put and the way you write is amazing. I did notice that there a a lot of spelling mistake throughout the story that makes it a little hard to read sometimes but other than that I love it. I myself am working on a story (not one that has to deal with anything from the Harry Potter books) and I would like to ask if I can use some aspects of your plot in my own story? My story will not be for pulication, it\'s just for fun and gives me something to do in my classes when I\'m bored. If you don\'t want me to use any part of your plot I understand and will respect your wishes. I hope that more of your story is on the way soon :). I can\'t wait to read what happens with Pansy and Ron and how you are going to bring everything to an end. Thank you for writing such a wonderful and enchanting story. ~Cutiepi~

omg!!! that was amazing! it took me two days to finish, but wow! update soon please!!!

I absolutely LOVE your story!!!! It is so good!! I really like stories that show a different side of Severus then what we normally see. I was yelling at my computer when I read the chapter of Severus remembering what happened to him. I want to kill Lucius. I REALLY do. Can I have first dibs on the sick bastard? Keep up the good writing.

OH MY GOD! That was a hell of a cliff hanger! I about had a heart attack when I saw that I had to wait for the next chapter. Please post as quickly as possible! Very good story. So glad you recovered from writer\'s block. I am so glad you have not made Ron & Harry out the be total prats as I like their characters too. Is Harry going to get a love interest too as everyone else is pairing up? Keep up the good work. Can\'t wait for the rest of the story!

oh wow oh wow! shocking, wonderful, horrible, ack! what a cliff hanger! thanks so much for posting, now im gonna go bite my fingernails to the nub in anticipation!