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ok so i started this story after you finished ans i am very glad that i decided to readit i love the story line and i love the way that you wrote everyone in this story.... great job!!!!!

@48 a great story ive enjoyed reading every bit of it and maybe a sequel??

*DB*

This was an excellent story and very well written. I am sad that it is over. and that was a very nice touch making Lucius a house elf

Very nice! Lucius as a magic-less house elf? I love it! LMAO!

So everyone lives happily ever after... well except for maybe Morty and that strange house elf. What a creative and appropriate ending for those 2. I have gone back several times to re-read this story, as it is one I've really enjoyed and looked forward to updates. I had moved it to the 'likely abandoned' Favorites list and was so, so happy to see it showing up again. Thank you for weaving your tale for us and finishing it up so as not to leave us hanging.

Lovely story, dearest! I enjoyed it very much and will of course look for anything you decide to post in the future.

Happy Writing!
S_G

ahhh... how lovely!!!

Nicely done. I hope you decide to write more - this was a very engaging tale.

This was a beautiful story. I couldn't have been happier with how it ended. Thank you for writing such a wonderful tale.


*cookies shaped like cauldrons and books*


~Sophie Max-Anderson

P.S. I really can't word it any other way. You have a real talent for writing.

Hi! Sat down and read it all in one sitting. A benefit to being ill, nothing to do but sit =) Love the premise, its a great story and I was thoroughly entertained. I look forward to reading more. =)


Happy Writing!
S_G

This is a harsh critique of this story. I am sure your other writings are spot on. I feel like the moral majority on the right has taken over this HP universe. Does the author want all women-girl and woman-to have every pregnancy go to term? Can you be more explicit? I don't think enough of the characters have told us why having a baby is a good thing to do when you are raped, involved in an incestuous situation, or you just don't think you're ready.

If only life could follow this easy formulation, where there is a responsible man to step in for every unexpected pregnancy...well I guess at least in this fantasy version, we can put the situation into a plug in formula where 16 year girls can have sex with one or many over 30 or 40 year old men with a happy conclusion. No Aurors or Courts decide to prosecute wrong doers and the law lays in individual hands.