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person Vampire_Exotica
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a fantastic piece of writing! will there be more? I hope so!!! I\'ve fallen in love with the adorable little \'sebby\' and his wonderful parents! I was so involved with reading this story I nearly had a heart attack when my partner asked me what I wanted for tea! I jumped so far out of my seat....he is still laughing. You really are a fantastic writer! Wish I had just a smidge of your talent! Hope you continue. I want to see Hermione get her revenge on Lucius. Squash him like a bug and make him cry! he he he. Poor pansy. Hope she finds happiness soon!
person midnighttiger
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. you just keep us on the edge about pansey dont you! i hope all turns out ok on that front. YIPPY!! Sevy and Hermy are happy (i LOVED the last bit with harry, it was the PERFECT ending to the chapter!) Thank you so much for posting.
person Kallie (Faye)
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOOO!! Damn girl great chapter...keep up the great work. More More More plz.
person Kari
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, I see your point about Harry and a girlfriend. Maybe towards the end, point him in the direction of a love. Love the lemon in this chapter. Am excited about Ron & Pansy. Please have something very just for Malfoy Sr\'s punishment. Keep up the good work.
person firewall
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I\'ve been reading your story over the past few days and I just have one thing to say....bloody brilliant!

Update please. I love it.
person lilac
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy fucking hell, that was such a funny ending!!!
laughing my head off...
good going, well written, and definetly enough to *cough* please anyone who reads it.
anyway, update soon will ya?
:) from your five star reviewer-->*****

lilac
person angel
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~lol~ i liked it a lot and i hope all goes well for ron,pansy and the baby ..... i was sad to read about the ectopic pregnancy my older sis had that happen to here and well one year later she had a baby girl so there is a good chance but i hope pansy keeps this baby ....well update soon and well later for now .....

angel

ohhh and i just love this story and thank you sooo much for a great one
person ldf
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m glad i could be of service. i take it that
what little i provided met with your approval?

another wonderful chapter, love. i think you\'re
doing well....

keep up the good work and i\'ll be here when
you need more help.

*hugs*

~blessings~
ldf
person June W
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 38 - ooh, you make me so happy when you update!!! I am sorry about Pansy\'s ectopic pregnancy, but glad that she was able to get help in time; dead Pansy would not be a good thing. I am VERY glad that Severus and Hermione finally are now officially engaged and had a nice lemon. Harry\'s lines were a perfect way to end this chapter! Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating!!
person pixi
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Red,

Good to be back. Loved the chapter. Tenderness, smutty goodness... snape in all his snapey sexy glory!
I do so love that your other characters, (Ron, Pansy etc) aren\'t just the general carbon cutouts that some people do.