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person SteffieSnape
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.1 - Excellent start to a story!!! I love the idea of the letters explaining everythng! It was very to the point andnot drawn out. It told us what we need to know. Very clever, I admire it! Can\'t wait to read more! Toodles!
person SteffieSnape
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2 - Great start so far. Though, if oyu don\'t mind me saying, Snape seemed a bit to, errr... squishy with the baby. Hmmm... I just don\'t picture Snape cooing at anything, even his own child he hadn\'t known about until moments before. Anyway, I still like this story and can\'t wait to see where you take it. Found some spelling mistakes, but that happens. Toodles!
person SteffieSnape
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.18 - Woah... that is really interesting. Ok, so did her parents send that or what? Are those coffins supposed ot reflect Hermione and Snape dead, or are Hermione\'s parents dead or something crazy? Hmmm.... and why is Hermione giving in so suddenly? Is she under some kind of curse or something? I have a fishy feeling here, hmmmmm.... Toodles!
person Barbara
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. I was so glad to seen an update, finnally. Keep it coming.
person angel
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man what is he up to and how is snape going to get out of this .... i cant wait in till you update next soooooooooo i hope you will be updateing sooooo ... well in till next time keep up the great work and later for now

angel
person Midnighttiger
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::cringe:: yikes. not a good situation for him to be stuck in. damn them both for this, and He and Hermione were supposed to go see Pansy. thank you so much for the update, was worried. Glad to know that all is well with you and this chapter was wonderful. so, will Severus be able to get out of this? maybe be called by Voldimort? Because if not we all know he is going to have to go back to Hermione and....well it wont be pretty.
person JTBJAB
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, such a long wait, and such a short chapter *sigh* Please update soon, I found this chapter to be highly amusing!
person June W
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 39 - ACK!!!! Please get Severus out of there!!! No Narcissa-Lucius-Severus sex squick! No-no-no-no-no-no-no-no-no!!! Hurry, hurry! I don\'t even want to know what\'s in the potions vials! Just get Severus home, fast!!! SHRIEK!!!!
person larana
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You evil tease. Making poor Severus confused.
person Jennifer Carter
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. More please...soon. :D