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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.19 - Wow...........
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.9 - OH WOW! What is he screaming about! GAH! *off to read*
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...... I\'m wondering if Draco is going to \"disappoint\" his parents as well in this story? Muahahahahahaha!!! Very interesting, very inteesting indeed! excellent!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.21 - Oh I knew it! WOO HOO!!!! This is a very interesting little group here! Wow.... very cool! Toodles!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.10 - AHHHH! THAT BASTARD LUCIUS! I HOPE HE DIES DIES DIES!!!! Anyways..... ooooohhh that is so sad! poor Snapey! I bet Hermione almost had a heart attack! Woah! Welll..... gotta read more.... Toodles!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my friggin gawd!!! This fic is excellent! 39 chapters? how do you do it?? This is very interesting...
Umm, just one thing.. you\'ve got heaps of spelling mistakes littered throughout this fic. Apart from that, it\'s a great read. Well structured. And you also seem to be one of those fic writers who always have to end a chapter with a cliffhanger!!!! It\'s truly excellent and I cant wait for more.
wormey
Umm, just one thing.. you\'ve got heaps of spelling mistakes littered throughout this fic. Apart from that, it\'s a great read. Well structured. And you also seem to be one of those fic writers who always have to end a chapter with a cliffhanger!!!! It\'s truly excellent and I cant wait for more.
wormey
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.11 - Oh wow, fourth year?! She was much too young for him to feel that way. She was just a girl still. Even at 16 she is still young, but it\'s better than 14. Well she is 18 now, or will be in September so that is a bit more reasonable. I didn\'t expect that little part about Snape actually wanting her. nice twist though, I just wish she wasn\'t so young. Ah well.... it\'s hermione so she has her ways. Can\'t wait to read more. toodles!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think there is amistake with the baby\'s age. You mentioned he was born on July 7th, and now it is 2 days before start of term. so that means it is the end of August, which also means the baby is nearly two months old now. Hmm... I\'m a bit confused as to how that happened. Anyway, I\'m glad she realized that she loves him, and the more she realizes it the more she\'s going to notice that specific little tingling feeling... muahahahahaha. You know they are going to get it on soon, hehehehe! I hope they do! Toodles!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.14 - It\'s about bloody time he kissed her! Wooooooooooooooot! hahahahahaha! Yay... I just hope this story has a happy ending, and that all three of them live and are not killed. That would be so terrible! A nice start like this and it could be ruined if one of them is killed. *sobs* Well Toodles!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.17 - OH.... MY.... GOD! OH MY GOD! What a morbid ending to a chapter! GAH! Oh I really do hope that was not a forehadow as to what is to come! That would be so horrible to have them die and have Sebastian left alone to be raised by someone else! That\'s too horrible, even for a fanfic! noooooooooooo! They are NOT going to die!!!! heheheehehe! Toodles!