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by NitaRiddle

person Megz
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THAT WAS BRILLIANT!
person Hannah
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. That was intense. And so well written with great techniques. I loved the part about the wind and the whispers and how he couldn\'t tell them apart. That was amazing and so well written. You should write a book or something and get it published. It doesn\'t matter to me that you can\'t write fluff, this was wonderful and I\'m going to check out some more of your stuff right now.
~Hannah
person Menagerie
schedule August 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoah...this is excellent! I honestly didn\'t know what to expect when I started reading it; not overly keen on the character of Malfoy, on the whole. But it\'s easy to have sympathy for him in this! Highly believable.

Perhaps the Sorting Hat was right - Harry should have been a Slytherin.

Brilliant fic. Never mind the fluff, let\'s have a few more like this!

Menagerie
person Khavi
schedule August 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I really like the tenique you used when writting this. I liked the fact it was from the victims point of veiw. It\'s pretty acurate to how victims feel to. Very nicely done.
person Poisonous Love
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...I\'m off to go read the sequal now...yea...I\'ll be going now...Okay....I\'m off....because I\'m curious....and it\'s gonna kill me one day....
person celticwitch
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Strong and well written. Well done.
person Evil Chick
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is really sad but really good. Please write a third part!
person Kiristeen
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very powerfully written story of the mindset of someone who\'s being abused by so-called love.

Kiri
person Morgeth
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my good! St! Strong stuff. Made me cry, and I really hope you are not writing from experience.
person faceless
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was incredibley depressing.