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It's amazing!!!!! I'm so horny!!!!!!
Will you update plz
I want to read more Harry/Ginny

This is excellent stuff. There isn\'t nearly enough Hex-love around, it\'s nearly always H/R/Hr which, to be honest, always seems to be more about Harry and Ron together. I hope you continue this soon.

this is a good fic, can\'t wait for next ter ter

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Hm...Your story is good....But I must make a few suggestions..not flames,just corrective critisism.One,you rushed WAY to fast into the sex scene...We barely had a feel for what\'s going on before suddenly they\'re in a different room screwing each other.Two,There seems to be an underlying plot,with the whole Harry,Ron,and Hermione already having screwed each other and it may be better if perhaps,you develop that a bit more,explain to us how it happened instead of just mindless smut,because while that is fun alot of time,it\'s alot better to have plot.Three,you REALLY need to be an incest warning on your summary.Four,You need to work on your paragraph structure..Character\'s words are just thrown into thr paragraphs....You need to start new paragraphs when someone is speaking...I\'ll continues to read it I t I would,and I bet many others would to,like to see more plot,and especially explain about Luna Lovegood,maybe give her a chapter point of view.By the way,Luna often makes more sense than that in the books.

Ja Ne.

Whre yre you on?...And can I have some?!

Oh my God, what are you ON?!

great chapter

Ginny sniffed.

Ooh, I like this! Luna/Ginny... I never thought of it, but I like it. Please write more.