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Just found and read this story today. Lots of lovely WAFF and smut. More please.

thats sweet

This story is great! I love it that Harry gets to have a happy ending, or is that a beginning? for a change.

For a first work, or published work, this shows that you are a gifted writer. The foreshadowing of Malfoy planning to do something revitilizes your plot and keeps it from going \"nowhere\" as you said. Malfoy wanting to get rid of Potter and recoup his family\'s power and prestiege by marrying such a powerful whitch has a lot of possiblities. I wish you would think of continue working on this one. You may have limited yourself by making Susanna so powerful (wandless magic, related to so many powerful wizards, the sight), but her baby could be interfering with the abilities. And you made a good choice when you limited her mother\'s through lack of use.

Anyway, thank you for sharing what you wrote.

^^ That\'s just so sweet. I needed a nice smut. Keep it up!

Great story I look foward to more

I love this story. Update soon!! I want to know what Malfoy is brewing in that bleched head (lol) of his.

Harry and Snape\'s daughter fics are always good. I prefer them over HP/SS because Snape still gets to hate Harry. Have you even thught up a name yet for Harry and Su\'s daughter? Update soon.

FANTASTIC! I have loved every word of this story! Susana Snape Potter is a brilliant and lively character. You have breathed life into her and she is a welcome addition to the pseudo HP world of fanfiction. Please dont give up on this story.

You know what might be fun are some In character \"male bonding\" moments between Harry and his father-in-law. Maybe thats a bit of a stretch or masochistic, but is would be funny.

email me when you update plzz

R u ever gonna finish??????