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by MyladyinRed

person jgoodman
schedule February 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

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person yamiyugi
schedule November 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update with one soon. If you do please let me know at erinthacker@comcast.net thank you
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person Anon
schedule August 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Please correct your disclaimer


It does not contain the required elements. It can be worded however you, the author, likes, provided that it is clear you are disclaiming the specific fandom (not just the characters) and state in some fashion clearly that you make no money/profit.


You must disclaim the actual fandom by NAME, not the owner/s of the fandom

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Failure to correct the disclaimer will cause your story to be hidden from public view after a week from the date of this warning, but not deleted; you can still correct your disclaimer, which will then be unhidden again as soon as possible. Continued failure to correct the disclaimer will cause the hidden story to be deleted after 30 days of being hidden. Re-uploads of hidden stories are deleted immediately, no warning given.


Below is a link to the Terms of Service in its entirety

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In addition, the next link listed is to the FAQ regarding disclaimers.

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You can also review our news post on the topic for a complete explanation, found here:
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Please also take a few minutes to read the content guidelines.

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Please remove this review once your disclaimer is corrected.


schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking the concept, however I found your writing style rather choppy and abrupt...I understand that you were trying to set up the story and get a lot of information across to your readers.

It may help you if you got a beta or a friend to read through it before you post it because two sets of eyes are always better than one.
schedule August 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please