rate_review Reviews

It ended there! It ended there! I cant believe you ENDED IT! loved that story! But there is so much more you could do! :)

It's over? o no, this was a GREAT story
well set up, well told, brilliant and original story line! (and the sex was extremely well written)

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!

Fantastic new chapter. I do like that we got to see another flashback. :) I can't wait for the next one!

The end already? I was not ready for that! It is a very nice ending though. I liked this story a lot.

Wonderful, simply wonderful. I liked the hot, smoking sex straight from the door with no talking and NO FOREPLAY...both too hot for the other!!!!

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I loved when Draco has to quite Hermoine's screams of pleasure. My favorite part was when he turns her around and bends her over.

You are wonderful for writing this for me. I had to tell Mark, his pet got a special gift of smut today!!!

Where is she? Unless I was reading too fast and missed it. Very possible. It was a very good few chapters! I can't wait for the next update!

I love this story and the angst between what Hermoine and Draco want and what other expect is palpable!!!

Please continue. A few more smutty flashbacks would be nice too *wink, hint, wink*

Very nicely done, not too much, just exactly right. And I wish my first time could have been something like it. :S

There's one thing that always makes me wonder, though. Almost all fan fiction I read depicts the first time as painful for the girl. For me, it didn't hurt at all - and I can't imagine being the odd one out in the majority of girls. Is it really true that so many girls even start crying from the pain of their first time, even after all the preparation that's going on in these fan-fic situations? Hard to imagine for me, sorry.

Just a random piece of my mind that I wanted to share, especially after reading another fan fic where the plot goes from "undescribable" pain to moans and orgasms

There had better be more I like this story....