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yes you're a tease dammit. But i'm still very much hanging for the next chappie. so when ever you're ready sweety...

I hate cliff hangers :( but I understand.

Aw, no contract! Oh well, that chap was cute, can't wait to read more!

Glad to see this updated so quickly! One thought--to me, the punishments Severus listed seem a little backwards. Ten spanks with an open hand wouldn't be the most comfortable, but I have no doubt that Severus or Draco would take care of Harry afterward. Spending a night alone without either of his Doms to cuddle or play with seems as though it would affect Harry very much, after his years of neglect. :) I know at least in my experience, I'll get spanked for talking back but have to have done something particularly bad to not be allowed to sleep in the same bed for a night.

I'd love to see Harry respond positively towards some bondage! But I'm so happy they're setting up a contract first before getting into the fun parts. :)

Thanka for the "beautiful muse" part (blushes) I think the contract should have not only punishes, but also rewards. Maybe not too materialistic since Harry is not interested in money, but something to show that his Doms really care about him....

oooooh I liked it, and I must say job well done on switching from first to third. its was well done and not choppy which it seems to do most times but it was smooth so thank you, also thank you for the quick updates its amazing oh and please stick with the third unless the chapter need first you do both well but this story is nice in third. please continue to update quickly or at least give us a warning! (sorry i hate when authours just peace out)
Again job well done
thank you
Kit

I really like your story!!! hope you will update soon.. thank you clanz

I think this was a good idea on how to continue the story, I'm excited to see where it goes. But what was the mystery substance? Does it have a meaning?

I'm so glad you're continuing this story instead of just dropping it now that Harry's submitted like some authors would. Your writing style is amazing and I'm really looking forward to seeing more of 'Why I submit'.

Oh I am really liking this! keep up the good work. :)